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英语作文闪光句及漂亮搭配汇总 |
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英语作文闪光句+漂亮搭配大汇总
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为了帮助大家短时间内能掌握一些比较闪光比较让阅卷老师眼前一亮的句子,特地把平时堆积的一些英语素材里的好词好句挖出来整理了一下,希望大家真地用心去看,去背,去用,哪怕考试因为这里面的一句话帮作文高了个2分3分咱也心满意足了!
开头类:
语文作文常言题好一半文,英语也一样,好的开头也就是一篇成功作文的一半,agoodbeginningishalfdone’sshoes,写作文的时候也要换位思考,替批分的老师想想阿四。如果这个老师,在进行了一上午枯燥的批阅过程后,猛然间,读到一个缤纷绚烂的开头,被深深shock到,被deeplyimpressed到,那会是何等的惊艳!下面就来欣赏一些容易吸引眼球的闪亮开头。
开头公式一:名人名言+谚语俗语
有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编尽管编但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?Aproverbsays,……
2.Itgoeswithoutsayingthat……
3.Asaclassicproverbgoesthat……(推荐!asaproverb/sayinggoes几乎人人会用,但加上个classic味道一下子就不一样了!)
4.thereismuchtruthinthesaying“……”(俗话说得好……)
5.citedassaying,“……”Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。(强调多做练习的重要性……)
Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。(学习要坚持不懈)
It''snevertoooldtolearn.活到老,学到老。
Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行始于足下。Actionspeakslouderthanwords.行动胜过语言。(学习,是Experienceisthemotherofwisdom.实践出真知。Romewasnotbuiltinaday.伟业非一日之功。Onefalsestepwillmakeagreatdifference.失之毫厘,谬之千里。Anidle闲散的youth,aneedy贫困的age.少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲。Asamansows,soshallhereap.种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆。(声明天道酬勤的真理)
Allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy.只工作不休息,聪明孩子也变傻。(也要说说学习不能过度)
Beautywillbuynobeef.漂亮不能当饭吃。Beautyisonlyskin-deep.美貌不过一张皮
Beautywithoutvirtueislikearosewithoutfragrance.无德之美犹如,徒有其表。Goodlooksarenotamust.美貌并非必需
Afinecoatdoesnotmakeagentleman.衣着并不能装扮出一个君子
Neverjudgeabookbyitscover.不可以貌取人
开头公式二:数字统计,用报告说话
要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。?原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:?Accordingtoarecentsurvey,
2.Arecentstatisticsshowsthat……
3.Arecentsurveyrevealedthat……
开头公式三:描述身边现象/生活现状/社会现象
在写到一些要求对某类热点民生话题的作文时,开头可以这样写
1.Anincreasingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizethat……(比如意识到环保、节能、低碳的重要性)
2.Manyindividuals,ifnotthemost,harbortheideathat……(比较高阶的一种,词漂亮又有插入语,推荐!)
3.Now,itisgenerallyaccepted/commonlythoughtthat……
4.Thereisagrowingtendencyfor……todo……(……开始呈现上升趋势)
5.Nowadays,manypeoplearelivingundertheidea/illusion/thoughtthat……
6.……hascausedwidepublicconcernrecentyears(描述某件引起广泛关注的话题时)
7.Thereisageneraldebateon/over……Heated/hotdebateshavebeenstirreduptheseday/recently(写到有争议的话题时)
8.……isnowbeingquestionedbymoreandmore/aincreasingnumberofpeople(写到某些举措不得人心,或者你持反对态度的时候,可以这么写)
开头公式四:介绍某些人、事、物
1.Whenspeakingof/Whenitcomesto……(万能公式)
2.……,describedas……,is……
e.g.Microblog,describedasanentirenewformofcommunication,hasnowcaughtonquicklyamongteenagersbyenablingtheuserstoupdatetheirlateststatuswithinjustafewwords.
3.Itseemsthat……is……(sweepingtheworld/catchingon/becomingpopularovernight)(比如说说科技的飞速发展,电脑、网络的兴起等等)
4.Formany/mostofus,……is……
e.g.Formostofus,adrinkofwaterisjustamatterofturningonatap.
开头公式五:气势磅礴的排比
1.For……,itis…….For……,itis…….Andfor……,itis……e.g.Forbaseballfans,2009wastheyearoftheYankees.Forjobseekers,itwastheyearoftheGreatRecession.Andforpeoplewhotrackbabynames,itwastheyearofthevampire.
2.Whatdoyou……but……?What……but……?What……but……?e.g.Whatdoyouuseeverysingleday,butneverpayfor?Whatistrulyyoursbutcamefromsomewhereelse?Whatisverypersonalbutsharedwitheveryone?Theanswer?It’syourname.
3.……isa……,a……,a……1.Ineverforget/remember/bearinmindthe……daywhen……
e.g.Ineverforgetthesweetdaywhenwewalkeddownthestreethandinhand.
2.Iremembersomewordssaidby+某位名人或熟知的人
e.g.IremembersomewordsbythethirdPresidentoftheUnitedStates,……
3.Onceuponatime……wasjusta……(用于强调某人某物今非昔比时)
e.g.OnceuponatimeLiubeiwasjustapeddlersellingstrawsandals.
曾经刘备也只是个卖草鞋的小贩
4.TherewasatimewhenI/we/youdidsth
e.g.Therewasatimewhenwemetwithaseriesofdisastersbutwedidn’tletgoourhope.
5.Thereareveryfewthings/peopleItrulylove/hateinlife.(few表达你对该事物的特殊感情,再用truly进一步强调,接着要做的就是开始具体叙述你所要写之事)
开头公式七:否定句开头
有时候否定句起到的强调效果往往要好于肯定句,也更具有文采
1.Perhapsnoone/nothingelse(onEarth/inhistory)hassuchae.g.PerhapsnooneelseonEarthhassuchanaffinitywiththeNorthPoleasJean-LouisEtienne.
也许这个世界上没有人会像Jean-LouisEtienne那样与北极有过如此亲密的接触
2.Therearen’tmany……(people/teenagers/citizens)whohavehadthehonor/chanceto……e.g.Therearen’tverymanyUScitizenswhohavehadthehonortomeetapresident,letaloneakidfromaforeigncountry.
3.No……hasreceivedmorepraiseandabusethan……
e.g.Noinventionhasreceivedmorepraiseandabusethancomputer.
开头公式八:强大的倒装句
相比前几种开头,倒装句式更能显示一个人的英语功底,同时因为用它的人相对较少,也更能博得阅卷老师“欢心”
1.Neverbeforeinhistoryhas(theissueof)……beenmore……(controversial;serious;appealing)thannowe.g.Neverbeforeinhistoryhastheissueofoverpopulationbeenmoreevidentthannow.
e.g.NeverbeforeinhistoryhastherelationshipbetweenChinaandJapanbeenmorehopefulthannow.
中日两国关系从没像现在这么乐观过/中日两国关系空前乐观
2.Gonearethedayswhen……was/were;did/coulddo(!!!强大句型!抒情记叙说明文通用!此句一出如同必杀><)
e.g.Gonearethedayswhenwestrived,welaughedandcriedtogetherwithDeng.
e.g.Gonearethedayswhenwecouldreleasethegreenhousegaseswithoutasecondthought.
开头部分小结:
一般大多数情况下能够套用的格式大致有以上这么多种,但所谓水无常形兵无常势,创作的力量是无穷的,在灵感如涌泉,文思如尿崩的时候也不妨用自己独一无二的搭配写出一个独一无二的开头,要知道,作文写到最高境界就是没有公式,自成一派,信手拈来。毕竟人是活的,公式是死的,公式只是为你提供一个结构,就像一块优质的画布,但颜料还得你自己往上涂。
二、文章内容类:1.ThesedelicatesentencessaidbyAudreyHepburn,whoiswidelyrecognizedasoneofthemostbeautifulwomen,aimatonetopic:itisone’sinnerbeautythatreallycounts.(非限制性定从,放在句子中间修饰中心词sentences,显然要比直接+aimat好得多)
2.Backham,whohasbeenalegendinhistime,willdefinitelybeanimmortal,eventhoughhemightnolongerbestrivingonthesparklingpitch.(一个非限制性定从+一个让步状语从句)
3.However,flowsofadvertisementswillnotonlyimpacttheproducer’simage,butalsomakethepotentialcustomersboredandevenspoiltheadvertisingprogram.(notonly……butalso也是写长句时的主力
军!)
4.Wherevertheygoorwhatevertheydo,theyalwaysbearinmindthattheyaremessengersofpeace,representingChina.(bear……inmind,一个宾从&现在分词作状语)
5.Almostatthesametimethenewscamethatpeopleindrought-strickensouth-westernChinaarefacinghorribleshortageofdrinkingwater,peopleintherestpartofChinajoinedhandstodonatewaterandotherresources,hopingtogiveahandtothoseintroubleandbenoonlooker.决不袖手旁观(有1个时间状语从句+1个同位语从句+1个名词&动词过去式构成的复合形容词+1个现在分词作目的状语,beno+名词表决不,动词搭配又合理,可谓长句中的典范)
第6句为某E同学Comment中的一句长句,大家把它和第5句对照着看,对照着学
6.EventhoughZhaohasbeenhandsomelycompensated650,000yuanbygovernment,whichisexpectedtobemore,thisfinancialcompensationstillcannotholdacandletoZhao’s11years’torturousandfreedom-lostprisonlife,thusconfirmingthesayingthat,“Moneyisnoteverything”.(让步状从+非限制性定从+复合形容词+现在分词作结果状语+引用谚语)
7.Sunshangxiangstoodoutasadazzlingpearlfromquantitiesofdistincthistoricalfigures,confirmingthesayingthat,‘Womenarenoinferiortomen’.(现在分词作结果状语与引用名言的完美结合,推荐)
内容技巧二:神出鬼没的插入语
为嘛要用插入语?短句中用插入语,可以充更多字数,中长句中间用插入语,让句式更整齐美观
来看一些典型的插入语
单词作插入语,如:besides,however,otherwise,therefore,though
1.Ontheotherhand,however,computerisnotwithoutitsdefects/disadvantages.
(however作插入语,作无论如何/但是的意思,是最常用的一个插入语)
2.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsofcomputersandavoidtheoppositefacet方面.
(therefore作插入语,使用的频率也非常之高,同时,上句中用fruits代替了advantages,避免了前后重复并且相当之形象)forexample,areneighbours.
2.TheUnitedNationsarecallingformoreenvironment-friendlyactions,inotherwords,theyaredemandingthatpeopleallovertheworld(should)switchtogreenproductsanddotheirbittoprotecttheearth.
内容技巧三:适当用被动替换主动
适当用被动句,更能反映客观事实,如:
1.Attentionshouldbepaidto替换Weshouldpayattentionto
2.Immediate/Instant/Effectivemeasuresshould/isneededtobetaken/carriedoutto……替换Weshouldtakeimmediatemeasuresto……
3.Great/Jointeffortshouldbemadeto……替换Weshouldmakegreat/jointeffortto……
4.Itshouldbepointedoutthat/Itshould替换neverbeneglected/overlooked/ignoredthat……Imustpointoutthat……/Weshouldneverneglect/overlook/ignorethat……5.Wearebroughtuptobelievethat……替换Wefirmlybelievethat……
内容技巧四:关键词、高频词句的表达多样性
一遍新、两遍厌,好曲不能听三遍,同样地,再精彩的单词被你反复用来用去,语势就要弱很多。相反,若能在表达同一个意思时切换用不同的近义词,不但给人耳目一新之感,也大大增加文章整体的文采。但使用时也要注意,不要刻意追求难词深词高级词,要是写出来一篇作文通篇全是专六专八的单词,批卷老师查金山词霸都来不及还帮你批好分数?
下面来看对于表达同一个意思,有多少种不同的写法(最土的写法放最后的括号里)
1.我(个人)认为:
Formypart;Frommypointofview/Frommyperspective;Personallyspeaking;PersonallyImaintainthat……;
I(firmly)holdtheviewthat……;I’moftheopinionthat……
(Inmyopinion&Ithink)Many,ifnotmost/Most,ifnotall,harbortheideathat……;Themajorityofthepeople/Manyindividualstaketheattitudethat……;It’suniversally/widelyaccepted/acknowledgedthat……;It’ssharedbyalargenumberofpeoplethat……;
There’snoonebutknowsthat……
(Manypeoplethinkthat……)tobecomeincreasinglypopular;
……gaingrowingpopularity;
……isincreasinglyappealingto;
……iscatchingonaincreasing/growingnumberofpeople
(……ismoreandmorepopular)pourattentioninto……;
take……intoaccount;
take……intoconsideration;
beconcernedwith/about;
keeponeself(well)informedof;
becomeawareof/that……;(payattentionto/putemphasison)tothebestofmyknowledge;
forallIknow/forwhatIcantell
(asfarasIknow)Itpaysto……;
It’srewardingto……;
It’sofgreatbenefitto……;
Onecanreaphugefruitsfrom……
(it’sgood/helpfulto……)giveriseto;
……(greatly)contributeto……;……isamajorcontributorto……;
……leadto……;……resultin……
(……cause……)
8.喜爱……,热衷于……
takeafancyto/haveafancyfor……
haveanaffectionfor……
havealoveaffairwith
befondof/bekeenon/bekeenabout……
beobsessedwith……
(like……)Nogardenhasnoweeds
Everythinghasitsplusesandminuses
Everythingcutsbothways
……isadouble-edgedsword
Weshouldnotbeblindtotheothersideof……
(everycoinhastwosides)doeverythinginone’spowerto……
takepainstodo
sparenoeffort/makeanefforttodo
doone’sutmostto……
goallouttodo……
doone’sbitto……
(tryone’sbesttodo)……has/leavesalottobedesired
……failstomeet/satisfyone’sneed/demand/requirement
……isfarfromsatisfactory
……doesn’tcomeuptoone’sexpectations
(……isundesirable)
12.……就是个极好的例子,……恰好能说明我的观点
……issuchaprimeexample
wecancite……asanexcellentexampleof
……perfectlyfits/illustratesmyidea/descriptionof……
……perfectlyservemypurpose
(forexample,……)
atsomepoint
tosomeextent/degree;toacertainextent/degree
inasortofway
inpart
inasense
(partly)……can’tnotevenholdacandleto……
……palesintoinsignificancewhencomparedwith……
……isnotinthesameclasswith……
……can’trival……in……
there’snocomparisonbetween……and……
……canneverapproach……
三、结尾类:说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,领导长篇大论,到最后冒出个“总而言之”之类的话。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子:1.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydraw/cometo/reach/arriveattheconclusionthat……?(议论类文章的万金油式句型,非常正规、书面,不过略微缺乏新意)
2.Thus,itcanbeincludedthat……/wecanfindthat……
3.Needlesstosay/Admittedly/Obviously,……(如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!4.Theample充分的evidencepresentedenablesustoreasonablyconcludethat……(成熟老练,中规中矩)
5.Therefore,it’squitereasonableforme/ustoassumethat……(总结完之后,来点美好的期盼,尽情地去YY)
结尾公式二:我们提出了以下建议……
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了Therefore/Thus,itishightimethatwedid……(提建议还用个虚拟!很拽很高级!!!)
2.Accordingly,Irecommendthat……(somemeasuresshouldbetaken)3.Consequently,tosolvetheproblem,I’dliketogivemyadvice/suggestionthat……(都已经想着如何帮人家解决困难了,多么实际一孩子……)
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