专题29提纲类作文
1.【】书面表达假如你是李华，你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动，你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1.时间：7月1日下午2点；
2.地点：学校操场；
3.内容：文化展览、节目表演等。
提示词：戏曲operan.表演performancen.
注意：1.词数80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
DearMike,
IknowyouareinterestedinChinesetraditionalculture.__________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
【答案】
Onepossibleversion:
DearMike,
I''mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】
写作亮点：这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。文章脉络清晰，自然流畅，首先通过分享好消息来引出展演及展演时间，进而介绍展演地点及展演内容最后提出邀请。同时文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，掌握一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：提纲类作文。
书面表达
某英语杂志社对部分中学生的周末活动做了问卷调查（结果如图），请你写一篇英语短文参加征文活动。
内容包括：1.简要描述调查结果。
2.谈一谈中学生应该如何度过一个有意义的周末（至少两条）。
要求： 1.词数：80-100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Wedidasurveyaboutmiddleschoolstudents’weekendactivities.Herearetheresults.
【答案】
Wedidasurveyaboutmiddleschoolstudents’weekendactivities.Herearetheresults.Wefoundthataboutfourtypercentofthestudentsoftendotheirhomeworkonweekends.Andthenumberofthestudentswhoplaycomputergamesonweekendsisaboutthirty-fivepercentsofthestudents.Onlyfifteenpercentsofthestudentslikereadingandabouttenpercentdootherthings.
Asstudents,Itisourdutytostudyhard.butwemustlearntorelaxonweekendssothatwecanlearnbetternexkweekdays.AlthoughitisfuntorelaxbyusingtheInternetbutspendingtoomuchtimeoncomputergamesisnotgoodforstudents.Ithinkthebestwaytorelaxisthroughexercise.Itishealthyforourmindandbody..Ialsothinkweshoulddomorereadingbecauseitcanopenoureyestotheworld.Ifso,Ithinkourweekendswillbemoremeaningful.
【解析】
考点：类作文。
—100词的回信。
Festivals Time Food Activities Meanings 1 TheLanternFestival InJanuaryorFebruary yuanxiao Watchlanternshowsanddragondances Prayforhealthandhappinessforthewholeyear 2 TheMid-AutumnFestival Inthemiddleofautumn mooncakes Watchthemoon;
TellthestoryofChang’e Celebrateharvest;gettogetherwiththefamily 3 ?????
erea参考词汇：prayfor祈求；harvest丰收
要求：
1.描述节日1和节日2，并自主选择节日3进行介绍，包括节日名称、时间、美食、活动方式及意义等；
2.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
4.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
From ZhangMing To John Subject AnintroductionofChinesefestivals DearJohn,
Gladtoreceiveyouemail.YouaskedmeaboutfestivalsinChina.Letmeintroducesomeimportantonestoyou.
Firstofall,IwanttointroducetheLanternFestival.ItcomesinJanuaryorFebruary.___________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Canyoutellmesomethingaboutthefestivalsinyourcountry?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.
Yours,
ZhangMing
【答案】
Onepossibleversion:
DearJohn,
Gladtoreceiveyouremail.YouaskedmeaboutfestivalsinChina.Letmeintroducesomeimportantonestoyou.
Firstofall,IwanttointroducetheLanternFestival.ItcomesinJanuaryorFebruary.Onthatday,weeatyuanxiao,gotowatchlanternshowsanddragondancestoprayforhealthandhappinessforthewholeyear.
TheMid-AutumnFestivalisinthemiddleofautumn.Itisatimeforthefamilytogettogetherandcelebrateharvest.Atnight,thewholefamilyeatdeliciousmooncakesandtellthestoryofChang''ewhilewatchingthebigbrightmoon.
TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportantforusChinese.It''sthebeginningofanewyear.Weusuallyeatdumplings,meatandsomeothernicefood.Towelcomethenewyear,wedosomecleaning,buynewclothes,setofffireworksandvisitourrelatives.Everyone,youngorold,hasahappysmileontheirfaces.
Canyoutellmesomethingaboutthefestivalsinyourcountry?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.
Yours,
ZhangMing
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。根据提示，可知主要介绍三个节日：元宵节、中秋节、及自己选择的一个
考点：类作文。
写作
如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing）,它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。请你根据提示以“Bike-sharing”为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。
要点提示：
Advantages Beconvenient,lesspollution,reducethetrafficpressure（减缓交通压力）
Takeexercise… Problems Throwaway,damage（毁损）,bestolen… Advice Civilized（文明的）,followtherules,takegoodcareof… 注意：
1.短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
3.词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Bike-sharing
Today,asagreenermeansoftransportation,bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Onepossibleversion:
Today,asagreenermeansoftransportation,bike-sharingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinmanycities.It’sknownthatithasmanyadvantages.Soit’senjoyedbylotsofpeople.
Firstofall,it’sveryconvenientforpeopletogosomewhere.Also,ithelpstoreducethetrafficpressure.Therewillbelesspollutionbecauseofbike-sharing.Besides,bike-sharinghelpspeopletakemoreexercise.Inthisway,it抯helpfultopeople抯health.
However,italsobringssomeproblems.Forexample,somepeoplethrowthemawayafterusingbikes.Evensomepeopledamagethem,andsomebikesarestolen.
Inmyopinion,everyoneshouldtrytobecivilizedandfollowtherulesofusingbikes.Aslongaswetakegoodcareofbikes,itwillmakeourlifebetterandbetter,andourenvironmentwillbemorebeautiful.
【解析】
problems.Forexample,Inmyopinion,等。
考点：提纲作文。
5.【】hereason(s)foryouridea(s).
4.Somethingyoudecideafteryouconsideralltheinformationinthestory.
“Cock-a-doodle-doo!”criedthecock（公鸡）.Hestoodinthefarm-yardandcriedaloud,sothatallpeoplemighthearhim.“Cock-a-diidke-doo!HowusefulIam,forIalwaysgetupfirst.AndIcryaboutassoonasthesunrisestomakeallpeopleinthehousewake.”
“Cluck!Cluck!Cluck!”criedthehenfromtheyard.Shewaswalkingaboutwiththreeprettylittlechickens,andtryingtofindsomefoodforthem.“Cluck!Cluck!Cluck!I’mmoreusefulthanyou.AlmosteverydayIlayanicefresheggformymaster’s（男主人）breakfast.ThenthinkhowusefulIamtomymistress（女主人）.Howmanynicethingsdoesshemakewithmyeggsforthechildren?Shecouldnotgetonwellwithouteggs.”
【答案】
TheUseoftheCockandthehen
Thecockisuseful.Healwaysgetsupfirstandcries,揅ock-a-diidke-doo!攖owakeallpeopleinthehouseup.
Thehenisusefultoo.Ontheonehiand,shetriestofindfoodforprettylittlechickens;ontheotherhand,shelaysanicefresheggforhermaster’sbreakfast.Hermistressmakesmanythingswithhereggsforthechildren.Shecouldgetonwellwitheggs.
Inaword,boththecockandthehenareuseful.Itiswrongofthemtoseetheirownuseonlyinsteadofseeingeachother’suse.
【解析】
【】书面表达
假如你应邀参加一个国际读书会，并将分享自己读过的一本好书。请根据下列表格中的要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你要分享的书。
Keypoints（要点） Wordsandexpressionsforreference（参考词汇） Whatthenameis TheOldManandtheSea … Whowroteit ErnestHemingway,America … Whatitisabout Fisherman,
Fightagainstfishandnature … WhyIlikeit Meaningful,nevergiveup,
Well-knownsentence:“Manisnotmadefordefeat（失败）.”,… Interesting,helpful,…
Well-knownsentence:… 注意：（1）可选择使用所给的书名及内容，也可另选书籍；
（2）短文内容可适当增加；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（4）词数：80~100；
（5）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
短文首句：ThebookI’dliketosharewithyouisTheOldManandtheSea.
复杂的语法结构和句型。
写作亮点：这篇短文结构合理，行文流畅，内容丰富，其中长句，复合句的运用非常熟练，为文章添彩。如：定语从句Thisbooktellsaboutafishermanwhoisluckyenoughtocatchahugefishatsea,；表语从句WhatIlikemostaboutthebookisthatthefishermannevergivesupwhenmeetingwithdifficulties.；宾语从句Istillrememberthewell-knownfromthebook:Manisnotmadefordefeat.等。
考点：提纲作文。
7.【】假设你是LiMing,你的笔友Lisa想了解在毕业之际,你将为母校做些什么有意义的事.从下表所列的五项内容中,至少选择两项,用英语给Lisa写一封电子邮件.
DosomethingforMySchool Volunteertodo(cleanuptheschool,…) Givesomethingaway(suchasbooks,…) Givesuggestions(organizemoreactivities,…) Maketheschoolmorebeautiful(planttrees,…) Writetoyoungerschoolmates(howtousetime,…) …
注意：(1)文中必须包括所选内容括号内的提示,并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
(3)词数：80--100；
(4)短文开头供选择使用.不计入总词数.
HelloLisa,
Howisitgoing?It’stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool._________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
LiMing
【答案】
HelloLisa,
Howisitgoing?It’stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.Herearemyplansthatlwouldliketosharewithyou.Firstofall,Iwillvolunteertodosomecleaningwithmyclassmates,suchascleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloors.Tokeepourschoolclean,wewillaskourschoolmatesnottolitteratschool.Also,Iwillgiveawaymyfavoritebookstotheschoollibrarysothatouryoungerschoolmatescanreadmoregoodbooks.AndIwillcallonmoreschoolmatestodoso.
It’sreallyhardformetosaygoodbye.Iwishmyschooltohaveabetterfuture.(98words)
LiMing
Possibleversion2
HelloLisa,
Howisitgoing?It’stimeformetoleaveschool.YouaskmewhatIcandoformyschool.HerearemyplansI''dliketosharewithyou.Firstofall,Iplantowritealettertotheyoungerschoolmates,tellingthemtovaluethepeoplearoundandgetalongwellwiththem.Andlwillsharemysuccessandfailureinstudy,too.Also,Iwillgivesomesuggestionsonhowtomakeourschoolbetter.Moretreesandflowersmustbeplanted.Moreafter-classactivitiesshouldbeorganizedsothatourschoolmatescanjoininthemtorelax.Ihopeallofouryoungerschoolmatescanliveandstudyhappilyinourschool.(98words)
LiMing
【解析】
意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
考点：提纲作文。
8.【】书面表达76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“Howcanateenagerhaveasuccessfullife?”的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。
同学主要观点 你的观点 努力学习
尊重父母
服务社会
计划未来 ……（至少两条）
注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的观点至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：尊重respect
短文首句：Ihaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowateenagercanhaveasuccessfullife.
【答案】
Ihaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowateenagercanhaveasuccessfullife.
Moststudentsbelieveit’snecessarytostudyhard.Afterall,studyplaysakeyroleintheirlife.Theyalsoagreetheyshouldrespecttheirparents,wholookafterthemeveryday.Besides,they’rereadytoservethesocietyandintheiropinionit’sreallymeaningful.What’smore,theythinkeachteenagerissupposedtomakeagoodplanforfuture.
Frommypointofview,weneedtomakesomegoodfriendssothatwecanlearnfromeachother.Also,wemustbeactiveandexercisemoretokeephealthybecauseit’simportanttoasuccessfullife.
【解析】
语法，不能是汉语式的句子，要使用一些高级词汇及句式。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：doasurveyaboutsth关于某事做调查；respecttheirparents,尊敬他们的父母；lookafter照顾；makeagoodplanforsth为某事做一个好的计划；makesomegoodfriends交一些好朋友；keephealthy保持健康。用了宾语从句，如：Moststudentsbelieveit’snecessarytostudyhard.What’smore,theythinkeachteenagerissupposedtomakeagoodplanforfuture.用了because引导的原因状语从句，如：Also,wemustbeactiveandexercisemoretokeephealthybecauseit’simportanttoasuccessfullife.增加了文章的亮点，也是提分的经典句子。
考点：提纲作文。
9.【】书面表达假如你是李华,你的笔友Frank是一名美国中学生,打算今年暑假来南充旅游。请你根据以下思维导图,用英语写一封email给他介绍一下南充。
要求:1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.必须包含思维导图所给的提示，并做适当发挥；
3.行文中不得出现真实人名，校名或地名（思维导图中提及的除外）；
4.词数：80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
DearFrank,
I''mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoNanchongthissummervacation.___________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hopetoseeyou!
Yours,
LiHua
【答案】
DearFrank,
I’mgladtohearthatyouwillcometoNanchongthissummervacation.Nanchongisagreatcitywithalonghistory.YoucanwatchNorthSichuanPuppetryandknowaboutChenShou,awell－knownhistorian.HewroteabookcalledRecordsoftheThreeKingdoms.
TherearemanyplacesofinterestinNanchong.YoucanvisitLangzhongAncientCity.Thebuildingsaresoamazing.AndyoucanenjoythefantasticJialingRiverandthewonderfulMountLingyun.Ifyouwanttorelaxyourself,makesuretotryZhangfeiBeef,ClearNoodlesinChiliSauceandotherdeliciousfood.Besides,youcanhavefunandbuysomethingspecialforyourfamilyandfriendsatWangfujingMall.
Hopetoseeyou!
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】
和词汇,句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚
考点：作文。
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