LearningAims1.Learntowriteanoutlinecomposition.2.Developagoo
dwritinghabit—analyze—organize—polish.3.Developtheabil
itiestosolvingtheoutlinecompositionwriting,theproofandt
herationalcloze.HowtowriteacompositionSixstepstowrite
acomposition①Analyzingthetask②Findingoutthemainpoints③
Thinkingofkeypoints/phrases④Formingsentences⑤Combiningthe
sentencesintoapassage⑥Copyingnormally假如你叫李华,你校同学正在就“高三学生要不要
参加体育锻炼”这一主题展开讨论,请根据下面所给的信息,给某英文报社写一封信,介绍讨论情况,并谈谈你的看法。【审题——抓准
信息·快速推断】【定点——把握要点，遣词造句】第1段：点明话题—高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼【引入6
分】【信息】我给你写信谈谈在我们学校的一个热点话题,那就是,高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼。【遣词造句】普通表达:Iwi
lltellyouaboutadiscussion.ShouldstudentsofSenior3take
physicalexercise?高级表达:利用进行时态、非谓语动词、连接短语等。I’m___________yo
uabouta______discussionamongusstudentsinourschool,______
__,whetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercise.
第2段：提出一种观点并具体阐述理由【作文重点12】【信息】有55%的同学赞成参加体育锻炼。【运用】55%的同学认为我们应该
每天进行体育锻炼,如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球等。【遣词造句】普通表达:55%ofthestudentsthinkth
atweshouldtakephysicalexerciseeveryday.Weshoulddomorni
ngexercise.Weshouldplaytabletennisorbasketball.高级表达:利用同位
语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等。55%ofthestudentsholdtheviewthatwesho
uld_____________________everyday,suchas,__________________
__,playingtabletennisorbasketball.【信息】赞成的同学认为参加体育锻炼有很多好处。【
运用2】锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病。锻炼能使大脑得到休息；使学习效果更好。【遣词造句】普通表达：Itcanbui
ldourbody.Itcanreduceillnesses.Itcanmakeushavearest.
Wewillhaveabetterlearningeffect.高级表达：利用并列句、非谓语动词和高级词汇等。It
canbuild_______________illnesses,__________________(同时),itc
an_________________(makesbadj)abetterlearningeffect.
第3段：提出另一种观点，并具体阐述理由【信息】：锻炼浪费时间。【运用2】：45%学生持反对意见，他们认为锻炼
浪费时间。【遣词造句】普通表达：However，45%ofthestudentsdon’tsupportthat.
Theythinkthattheyshouldnottakephysicalexercise.Itisa
wasteoftime.高级表达:利用定语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等However,45%ofthe
studentsareagainstthat，_______complainthat______________
______isawasteoftime.第4段：表明自己的倾向，阐述理由【信息】:适度锻炼。【运用】
:我认为适度锻炼是必要的,但是不能太剧烈.【遣词造句】普通表达：Ithinkthatproperphysicalex
erciseisnecessary.Butweshouldnevertakeexercisetoohard.
高级表达：利用宾语从句、高级词汇等。I_________thinkthatproperphysicalexercise
isnecessarybut_______________.Deareditor,I’mwritin
gtotellyouaboutaheateddiscussionamongusstudentsinour
school,thatis,whetherstudentsofSenior3shouldtakephysica
lexercise.55%ofthestudentsholdtheviewthatwesho
uldtakephysicalexerciseeveryday,suchasdoingmorningexerc
ise,playingtabletennisorbasketball,etc.Itcanbuildourb
ody,keepushealthyandreduceillnessesandinthemeanwhileit
canmakeuscompletelyrelaxedforabetterlearningeffect.
However,45%ofthestudentsareagainstthat,whocomplain
thattakingphysicalexerciseisawasteoftime.Itcanmakeus
tiredorfeeltooexcitedforfurtherlearning.Moreoverwemayg
ethurtduringtheplay.Ipersonallythinkthatproper
physicalexerciseisnecessarybutnevertoohard.
yours
sincerely
LiHua【书面表达---短文改错---新完型填空三位一体】之短文改错D
eareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutaheatingdiscu
ssionamongourstudentsinourschool,thatis,whetherstudents
ofSenior3shouldtakephysicalexercises.55%ofthes
tudentsholdtheviewwhichweshouldtakephysicalexerciseever
yday,suchasdomorningexercise,playingthetabletennisorb
asketball,etc.Itcanbuildourbody,keepushealthandreduce
illnessesandthemeanwhileitcanmakeuscompletelyrelaxedfo
rabetterlearningeffect.Therefore,45%ofthestudent
sareagainstthat,whocomplainthattakingphysicalexerciseis
awasteoftime.Itcanmakeustiredandfeeltooexcitedforf
urtherlearning.Moreoverwemaygethurtduringtheplay.
Ipersonallythinkthatproperphysicalexerciseisnecessaryb
utnevertoohard.
yourssincerely
LiHua书面表达---短文改错---新完型填空三位一体】之新完型填空Deareditor
,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutaheateddiscussion1.___
usstudentsinourschool,thatis,whetherstudentsofSenior3
shouldtake2________(physics)exercise.55%ofthestude
ntsholdtheviewthatweshould3._____(take)physicalexercise
everyday,suchasdoingmorningexercise,playingtabletennis4.
____basketball,etc.Itcanbuild5.___(we)body,keepushealt
hyand6.______(reduce)illnessesandinthemeanwhileitcanmak
eus7.________(complete)relaxedforabetterlearningeffect.
However,45%ofthestudentsareagainstthat,8.___comp
lainthattakingphysicalexercise9.__(be)awasteoftime.Itc
anmakeustiredorfeeltoo10._____(excite)forfurtherlearni
ng.Moreoverwemaygethurtduringtheplay.Ipersona
llythinkthatproperphysicalexerciseisnecessarybutnevert
oohard.AssignmentYoushouldtrytousesomesuperiorphrases,
specialsentencepatternsorsuitableconjunction.Todearstude
nts:Thoughthecapacityoftheknowledgeisalittlelargein
thisperiod,I’dliketocombinethewritingwiththeproofandt
herationalcloze,whichaimstomakeyouawareoftheinnerlink
ofdifferentknowledgestructures.heatedusexercisethatdo
inghealthyHoweverorinamongphysicaltakeorourreducecompl
etelywhoisexcited1.Rewritethesetwocompositions.2.Recites
omegoodsentencesandpassage.3.Dosomereading.难以快ByWang
YinghuiMarch15th,2016Whatisagoodwriting？Content:
everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容
要完整)Structure:Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)
Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)
Language:NoChinglish(避免中文式英文) NoGrammaticalm
istakes(没有语法错误) Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychange
dsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)(云南省第二次统测)每年都有许多人
出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请给报社专栏编辑写一封
信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。注意:词数100~120个,开头已经写好,不计入
总词数。【审题——抓准信息·快速推断】项目结论体裁__________话题以
为主题时态_______________人称_____________书信（给编辑一封信）
一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用第一人称为主Step1.Analyzingthetask“文明出国旅游”【定点——把握
要点，遣词造句】第1段：点明话题—出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为【引入6分】【信息】每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引
起了社会关注。【遣词】1.假日游客:2.出国旅游观光:3.不文明行为:4.引起了社会关注:【造句】Ev
eryyear,agreatmanygoabroad
,whiletheyareenjoyingthem
selves,someofthem,which
.Step2.Findingoutthemainpointsandformingsente
ncesholidaymakergoabroadforsightseeingandrelaxationbeha
verudelycauseabigconcernholidaymakersforsightseeingandr
elaxationbehaverudelycausesabigconcern第2段：针对不文明行为三条建议【作文重点
12分】【信息】1.尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；3.其它。【点拨】扩充要点,使文章条理【运用】建议注意自己的行为。首先，尊
重习俗；其次，不高声喧哗，再次，插队是不被接受的。【遣词】1.尊重习俗：respectand
followlocalcustoms2.高声喧哗：talkloudlyinpubl
icplaces3.插队：queuejumping【造句】Inmyopinion
,itisnecessarytowatchourmanners.First,wemust___________
_________________,Besides,we’dbetter_________________________
_toavoiddisturbancetoothers,Also,beawarethat____________
__isunacceptableinmanycountries。respectandfollowlocalcu
stomsnottalkloudlyinpublicplacesqueuejumping第3段：向社会呼吁【结
尾6分】【信息】呼吁大家做文明游客【点拨】适度发挥,以使文章符合逻辑【运用】我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意
自己的行为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。【遣词】1.代表国家形象：representourcountry
2.注意：becautiousabout3.只有这样：only
inthisway【造句】moreimportantly,weshouldbearinmindthat
weare______________________whileabroad,soweneedto_________
______howweact,_________canweenjoyourtripsabroadandhav
ebeautifulmemoriesaswell.representingourcountrybecautio
usaboutonlyinthiswayDearEditor,I’vereadyourdi
scussionsonhowtobehaveproperlywhentravellingabroad.Every
year,agreatmanyholidaymakersgoabroadforsightseeingandr
elaxation,whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,someofthembehav
erudely,whichcausesabigconcern.Howtobeacivilizedtouri
sthasbecomeaheatedtopic.Inmyopinion,itisnecessarytow
atchourmanners.First,wemustrespectandfollowlocalcustoms
,Besides,we’dbetternottalkloudlyinpublicplacestoavoid
disturbancetoothers,Also,beawarethatqueuejumpingisunac
ceptableinmanycountries,moreimportantly,weshouldbearinm
indthatwearerepresentingourcountrywhileabroad,soweneed
tobecautiousabouthowweact,onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyo
urtripsabroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.
yours,LiHu
aStep3.Combiningthesentencesintoapassage【连句成篇】【书面表达---短文
改错---新完型填空三位一体】之短文改错DearEditor,I’vereadyourdiscuss
ionsonhowtobehaveproperwhentravellingabroad.Everyyear,
agreatmanyholidaymakersgoesabroadforsightseeingandrelax,
whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,someofthembehaverudely,
thatcausesabigconcern.Howtobeacivilizedtouristhavebec
omeaheatedtopic.Inmyopinion,itisnecessarytowatchourm
anner.First,wemustrespectandfollowlocalcustoms;However,
we’dbetternottalkloudlyinpublicplacestoavoidingdisturba
ncetoothers,Also,beawarethatqueuejumpingisunacceptable
inmanycountries,moreimportant,weshouldbearinmindthatw
earerepresentingourcountrywhileabroad,butweneedtobec
autiousabouthowweact,onlyinthiswaycanweenjoyourtrips
abroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.
your
s,
LiHuaproperlygorelaxationwhichhasmanner
sBesidesavoidimportantlysoDearEditor,I’vereadyo
urdiscussionsonhow1___behaveproperlywhentravellingabroad.
Everyyear,agreatmanyholidaymakersgoabroadfor2___________(
sightsee)andrelaxation,whiletheyareenjoyingthemselves,som
eofthembehave3________(rude),whichcausesabigconcern.How
tobeacivilized4________(tour)hasbecomeaheatedtopic.Inm
yopinion,itisnecessary5_________(watch)ourmanners.First,
wemustrespectandfollowlocal6________(custom）;Besides,we’d
betternottalkloudlyinpublicplacestoavoiddisturbanceto
others,Also,beawarethatqueuejumpingis7_______________(una
ccept)inmanycountries,moreimportantly,weshouldbear8___min
dthatwearerepresentingourcountrywhileabroad,9___weneed
tobecautiousabouthowweact,10_____inthiswaycanweenjoyo
urtripsabroadandhavebeautifulmemoriesaswell.yours,LiHuatosightseeingrudelytouristintowatchunacceptablesoOnly【书面表达---短文改错---新完型填空三位一体】之新完型填空customs1.锻炼浪费时间。2.锻炼后很兴奋,难以快速投入学习。3.锻炼使人疲劳，而且可能会受伤。1.应该每天进行体育锻炼,如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球等。2.锻炼能增强体质,减少疾病。3.锻炼能使大脑得到休息,使学习效果更好。反对（45%）赞成（55%）注意：1.词数100左右；2.内容充实，结构完整，语义连贯；3.书写须清晰、工整。参考词汇：体育锻炼physicalexerciseWritingpractice项目结论体裁_________话题以__________________________________为主题时态_______________人称_____________书信（给英文报社一封信）“高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用第一人称为主writingtotellheatedthatistakephysicalexercisedoingmorningexerciseandinthemeanwhilemakeusrelaxedforourbodyandreducewhotakingphysicalexercisepersonallynevertoohard【连句成篇】 |
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