高考英语短文改错解题技巧
考点1.名词
命题特点:本来用复数,却用单数.改正方法:(1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份;(2)根据上下文的逻辑关系.
详解:
1.Shesaidthatsheandmyschoolmateallwishedmesuccess.
2.Afterclasswebecomestrangeratonce.
3.TheywantmetodevoteallmytimetomystudiessothatI’llgetmarksinallmysubject.
4.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywassobeautiful.
5.Thereareadvantageforstudentstoworkwhilestudyingatschool.
6.Hehadnoideasthatthekitchenwasnotforguests.
7.Ilookedathisotherhands.
考点2.代词
命题特点:
1.女性代词指代男性或相反;2.单数指代复数;3.代词词性误用。
改正方法:联系上下文的逻辑关系。
代词的错误特点:
1.人称代词的偷换错误2.缺少人称代词的错误3.人称代词数的一致问题4.人称代词格的一致问题
详解:
8.TheSmithsdidhisbesttomakemefeelathome.
9.Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.
10.Itwasaboutnoonwhenwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.11.SoonIbegantoenjoytalkingtomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.
12.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.
13.Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.
14.Itookitinmeandwewalked.
考点3.介词
命题特点及改正方法:介词涉及搭配错误,因此可从以下方面确定错误:1)介词的基本用法;2)习惯搭配;3)动词词类确定错误,如talk,,serve,wait等。
介词的错误:
介词短语常常考,固定搭配要记牢。介词后边跟宾语,结合语境细推敲。
详解:
15.Wedonotseemtogetmuchtimetotalkabouttogether.
16.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.
17.ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.
18.We’lltalkwithourplanfortheweekendoverdinner.
19.Iamwritingtothankyouwithyourkindhelp.
20.Hewaslookingforaglassthecupboard.
21.Eachtheselinesstandsforatroubleinmylife.?
考点4时态
命题特点及改正方法:现在时与过去时的误用,句中一般没有时间状语。每年都考。要注意联系上下文,着眼于整个语篇的时态。通常整篇都是过去,突然一个句子用现在时。其中又以一般现在时和过去时互改为多。
详解:
22.Theydidnotwantmetodoanyworkathome;theywantmetodevoteallmytimetomystudiessothat---
23.Thetimepassesquickly.Eveningcame.
24.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.
25.Idon’tknowthattheydon’tliketotalkwithme.Sometimes,wetalkedtoeachotherverywellinclass.
26.Iwillwriteagainandsendyouthephotoswetaketogether.
27.WehadguestslastnightwhohavenotstayedinaB&Bhotelago.
考点5.and\but\or误用及前后不一致
命题特点:主要考查and、or、but、so等并列连词的误用。However与although/though不能同时出现
改正方法;1)根据句意确定误;2)根据句子的逻辑关系确定错误。
详解:
28.Sheissmilingatmebutnoddingatme.
29.Itlooksasifmyparentstreatmeasavisitorandaguest.
30.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.
31.Icameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.
32.Wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.
33.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.
考点6.从句连词
命题特点及改正方法:句子结构方面的错误主要涉及句子成份和复合句的关联词等。解答这类题从以下方面来思考:1)句子结构是否完整,成份是否冗缺;2)复合句中从句的关系词或引导词的运用是否得当等。
平行结构常使用等立连词and,but,or或连词词组notonly…butalso…,either…or…,neither…nor…遵循就近原则。
主语+With,togetherwith,aswellas,besides,动词与主语一致
and,but,or,also前后动词时态不一致。(具有对称性)
详解:
34.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.
35.Idon’tknowthattheydon’tliketotalkwithme.
36.ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateeverythingintoEnglish.
37.Whatthingsareinotherhomes,Iwonder.
38.Earningtheirownmoneyallowsthemtospendonanythingasiftheyplease.
39.Theydidnotwantbreakfastbecausethattheyweregoingoutearlyinthemorning.
考点7.冠词
命题特点及改正方法:英语中冠词只有三个,只能从以下几个方向出题:1)不定冠词a和an互改;2)不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改;3)根据需要增删冠词。
详解:
40.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.
41.Wemaybeonefamilyandliveunderasameroof,but---
42.OnThursdayIwillhavetodecidewhatIwanttodooveraweekend.
43.Ihopeyou’vehadpleasantjourneyhome
考点8.形容词和副词
命题特点及改正方法:主要考查形容词和副词的误用、形容词及副词的比较级等。1)根据adj.或adv.的基本用法确定错误;2)修饰连系动词或名词用形容词;3)修饰行为动词、形容词、过去分词及整个句子用副词。
详解:
44.Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly.
45.TherehavebeenreportsinAmericaaboutpeopletryingtostealpersoninformationforbadpurposes.
46.FindinginformationontheNetiseasily.
47.SowhatIlearnedfromthejobwasmuchmoreimportantaswhatIearned.
48.Mypronunciationwasterribly.
49.Theycamebacklatelyandhadsometea.
考点9.非谓语动词
命题特点改正方法:1)谓语动词和非谓语动词的错用;2)动词不定式和动名词的错用;3)现在分词和过去分词的错用等。
详解:
50.Earningtheirownmoneyallowthemtospendonanythingastheyplease.
51.MyparentswilldoalltheycanmakesurethatIgetagoodeducation.
52.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmyselfinsimpleEnglish.
53.Wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.
54.Somestudentsmayalsotosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.
短文改错口诀
动词形,名词数,还要注意形和副;非谓语,细辨别,习惯用法要记住;句子成分多分析,逻辑错误须关注;
冠词连词常光顾
详解:
一、动词形:主要包括两类错误:动词的时态和语态错误,以及主、谓不一致的错误。动词形常见错误:
1)一般过去时与一般现在时错用。
2)第三人称单数形式错用。第三人称单数:Is/was
2)and,but,or,also前后动词时态不一致。(具有对称性)
4)主谓不一致。
5)缺少谓语动词1.主谓宾结构
缺少be动词2、主系表结构(am/is/are/was/were)
6)主动语态与被动语态错用wash-iswashed
7)Usedto的运用错误
二、名词数:指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。改正方法:
1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份.2)根据上下文的逻辑关系.
三、还要注意形和副:注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。命题特点及改正方法:主要考查形容词和副词的误用、形容词及副词的比较级等。根据adj或adv的基本用法确定错误;修饰系动词(am/is/are/was/were)或名词用形容词;修饰行为动词、形容词、过去分词及整个句子用副词。
四、非谓语,细辨别:这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词,动名词和不定式错误。1)不定式todo2)动名词doing作主语、宾语3)and连接的不定式或动名词前后一致(尤其距离较远时)4)现在分词和过去分词的区别等
五、习惯用法要记住:主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识,其错误表现形式主要有三种:多词、少词和搭配错误。
六、句子成分多分析:不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析,才能找出用词不当的错误。
七、逻辑错误须关注:与句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,属于逻辑性错误,如称谓上的张冠李戴。
八、冠词连词常光顾:常考的错误形式有:连词but,and,or和so的用法错误,以及冠词的用法错误等。
?四不改:
①标点符号不改。
②大小写不改。
③词序错误不改(不是不改,而是按错词或少词来改)。
④在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词,在句中不可能用错
答案
1(schoolmate改为schoolmates)2(stranger改为strangers)3(subject改为subjects)
4(picture改为pictures)5(advantage改为advantages)6(ideas改为idea)7(hands改为hand)
8(his改为their)9(who’s改为whose)10(them改为us)11(me改为myself)12(showed后加it)
13(our改为their)14(me改为mine)15去掉about)16.(去掉at)17(去掉was后的in)18(with改为about)19(with改为for)20(glass后加in)21(each后加of)22(did改为do)23(passes改为passed)
24(reads改为read)25(talked改为talk)26.(take改为took)27.(have改为had)28.(but改为and)29.(and改为or)30(and改为but)31(but改为and)32(visiting改为visited)33(reads改为read)
34(noon后加when)35(that改为why)36(去掉that前的in)37(What改为How)38(去掉if)39(去掉that)40(famous前加a)41(a改为the)42(a改为the)43(had后加a)44(quietly改为quiet)45(person改为personal)46(easily改为easy)47(as改为than)48(terribly改为terrible)49(lately改为late)50(allow改为allows)51(make前加to)52(talk改为talking)53(visiting改为visited)54(去掉to)
(一)WhenIwalkedintotheclassroom,theteacherwashandinginthetests.
Iwasfeelingverynervous.Ihadstudied?atallattheweekend
asIhadthoughtitwouldbeeasytest.?Iwentthroughthetestformanytimes
butIcouldonlyanswer??threeoutfromthetwentyquestions.Ididnotwanttofail
theexam.Then,Iputmybookundermydesk,openingit?andstartedlooking
fortheanswer.Theteacherwasn''t?lookingatme,butIcopiedsomething.
Suddenly,Ifeltahand?onmyshoulder!Theteachercaughtmecheating.Idon''t
knowwhattosay.Luckily,theteacherdidnotpunishfor?cheatingbutinstead
gavemeasecondchance.
(二)Ihaveagoodfriendwho’snameisLiuMei.Sheisour?monitorandoneof
theexcellentstudentsinourclass.??Cleverassheis,butshewordsveryhard.
Wehavea?lotoncommonandhavealottotalk.Oneeveningshe?toldme
thatsomethinghappenedwhenherparentswasout.Shewasdoingherhomeworks
oneSundaymorningwhen?shesmeltsomethingburning.Shestoppedlookout
ofthewindowandfindacloudofsmokecomingoutofherneighbor’shouse.
Shecalled119immediate.Tenminuteslater,thefiremencameandputoutfire.
Herneighbor?wasverythankfulforherhelp.
(三)Ioftendreamof?ateacher,Idreamofstandingontheplatformintheclassroom
andgivelessonstolovelyboysandgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththem,butwatchthem
growingup.IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstayingwiththem.Iknowthereis
noteasytobeateacher.You?havetolearninordertoteach.Withoutenoughknowledges,
youcanneverlearnwell.Whatismore,youhavetobefriendswithyourpupilsand
takegoodcareofhim.?Onlyinthiswaycanyoubegoodteacherandwinrespectfromthem.ThoughIamastudentnow,Iwillworkasveryhardtomakemydreamcometrue.
(四)Itisapleasureformetowritethislettertotellhowmuch?Ienjoyedmystay
inyourwholefamilylastweek.ThiswasmyfirstvisittoaEnglishfamily.
Atfirst,Iwasworriedaboutmy?poorEnglish.AndwhenIsawyourwife
andchildrenwaitingformewithwarmsmileofwelcomeontheirfaces.
Iimmediatelyknewthateverythingwouldbeallright.Therearemanymore
happymemoriesoftheweekthatIwillkeepthemwithmeforever.Iparticularly
enjoyeddrivingthroughthecountrysidewithyouandsawthe?changingcolors
oftheleavesonthetrees.Ialsolikethe?fishingtrip.Itwassuchmuchfun.
(五)IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinTianjinyet.Iwastheninaschool
forstudentsfromTibet.Aswewerealllefthomeatearlyage,wemetlotsof
problemsinourdailylife.We?hadtodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyus.
However,weseldomfeltlonelyorhelplessly.Weenjoyedourhappylife.Atweekends,
wewouldplaybasketball,swimminginthepool,orgoforapicnic.Wewerelivinginabig
family.Wetreateachotherasbrothersandsisters.Ifanyoneofyouhadany?difficulty
inourlifeandstudy,theotherwouldhelphimout.Ithasbeenfiveyearswhenwegraduated,
butthosememories?areassweetaseverbefore.
(六)Duringthesummerof2001,IstartedreadbooksinEnglish,mostlystories.
Iwouldlearnalotofnew?wordsfromthesebooks,butIhadterriblyproblems
memorizingthem.Ihadtolookuptothesamewordmanytimes,forwhichwas
quitetroublesome.Irealized?Idoneedawaytorememberallthisvocabulary.
Itwas?agreatachievementformyself.Istartedwritingdownwordsfrombooks
thatIread.Iwouldcomebackfrom?school,andthensitforanhourandtwo.
Iwrotedownnewwordsandaddedittomycollection.Bytheendoflastyear,
mycollectionhasgrownto3,000words.
(七)Thisisastorytoldbymyfather:“WhenIwasboy,???themostexcitingthing
waswhentocelebratetheSpringFestival.Mygrandmawasthebestcooker
intheworld?butcouldmakethemostdeliciousdishes.Onetime,Ijust?couldn’t
waitfortheSpringFestivaldinner.AsIwas?abouttakeapiecefromacooked
duck,IsawGrandmainthekitchenlookingatme.Shakeherhead,shesaid,
‘It?isn''tagoodtimetodothat,dear.’AtonceIapologize?andcontrolledme
atmybesttillthedinnerstarted.Youknow,thatwasadinnerwehadwaited
forseveralmonth.”
()Thereareadvantageforstudentstoworkwhile?studyatschool.
Oneofthemwasthat?theycanearnmoney.Forthemostpart,
studentsworkingtoearnmoneyfortheirown?use.Earningtheir
ownmoneyallowthem?tospendonanythingasiftheyplease.
Theywouldhavetoasktheirparentsformoneyorforpermission
todothingsby??themoney.Somestudentsmayalsotosave
upforourcollegeorfutureuse.
(九)DearMr.Brown,
Iamwritingtothankyouwithyourkindhelp.??Beforeyoucametoteachus,
Ihadnotinterestin?English.Mypronunciationwasterribly.Icould
onlyspeakafewwords.Butoneandahalfyearlater.?InowthinkEnglish
funtolearn.Igotalotoffromyour?encouragingwords.Iwillalwaysremember
whatyou?said,“Ifyoutryto,youcanbeNo.1!”Ihopeyou’vehadpleasant
journeyhomeandwillcometoChina?againsometimesinthefuture.Iwill
writeagain?andsendyouthephotoswetaketogether.
Yourssincerely,LiMin
(十)Dearfriends,
Itisrealagoodchancetohavemetallofyouhere.?Wehavespentseveral
preciousweekendinlearninginthe?EnglishClub.Althoughwehavebeen
memberforashort?periodoftime,wehavemadeagreatprogress.Thatis
becauseweareallverymuchactiveandtheactivitiesarenotonlyenjoyable
andalsohelpful,Besides,theforeignteachershereworkhardandtryhisbestto
maketheactivitieslivelyandinterested.Iamverypleasedtosaythatallof
usgreatlyimprovedourspokenEnglishsofar.Iamlookingforwardtoseeall
ofyouagaininthenearfuture!
Thankyou.
专练1答案
(1)第一行:in改为out?第二行:had后加not第三行:easy前加an;去掉for?
第四行:from改为of?第五行:opening改为opened;answer改为answers??
第六行:but改为so?第七行:don’t改为didn’t??第八行:punish后加me??????????
(2)第一行:who’s改为whose.第二行:去but第三行:on改为in;talk后加about
第四行:was改为were;homeworks改为homework
第五行:stopped后加to第六行:find改为found
第七行:immediate改为immediately第八行:去掉the
(3)第一行:dream后加being/becoming第二行:give改为giving;but改为and?
第三行:was改为am;there改为it?第四行:knowledges改为knowledge/learning
第五行:learn改为teach第六行:him改为them;be后加a第七行:去掉as
(4)第一行:me改为you第二行:in改为with;a改为an第三行:But/Yet
第四行:smile改为smiles第五行:去more第六行:去掉them
第七行:saw改为seeing第八行:like改为liked;such改为so????????????????????.
(5)第一行:去yet.第二行:去were;early前加an
第三行:us改为ourselves第四行;helpless第五行:swimming改为swim
第六行:treat改为treated;you改为us第七行:other改为others;when改为since
(6)第一行:read改为reading,或前加to第二行:terribly改为terrible.
第三行:去掉to;去掉for第四行:do改为did第五行:myself改为me;books前加the
第六行:and改为or第七行:it改为them第八行:has改为had
(7)第一行:boy前加a.第二行:去掉when;cooker改为cook
第三行:but改为and;第四行:wait后加for;take前加to第五行:Shake改为Shaking
第六行:apologize改为apologized;me改为myself第八行:month改为months
(8)第一行:advantage改为advantages;study改为studying第二行:was改为is????
第三行:working改为work第四行:allow改为allows;去掉if
第五行:would后加not第六行:by改为with;去掉to第七行:our改为their???????????????????????????????????
(9)第一行:with改为for第二行:not改为no;terribly改为terrible
第三行:year改为years;English后加is第四行:去掉of
第五行:去掉to;pleasant前加a第六行:sometimes改为sometime第七行:take改为took
(10)第一行:real改为really第二行:weekend改为weekends
第三行:member改为members;去掉第二个a第四行:去掉much
第五行:and改为but;his改为their第六行:interested改为interesting
第七行:greatly前加have;see改为seeing
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