高三应用文写作专练--------建议信的写作建议信写作目的： 要求对有关问题进行分析并提出自己的看法和建议。其写作 框架流
程为：开头 （beginning）----- 开门见山，向对方展示你的理解，明确陈述自己的观点。主体（body) ----对问题
进行分析，接着提供几条建议来帮助解决这个问题。结尾 （ending）---- 结尾一定是坑底的信息，让收信人看到后能够振作起来，树
立信心。素材积累：一、常用词汇upset; confused; schedule; c
onfidence; overcome; feel lonely; turn to sb for
help; put one’s heart intogive sb some advice / tips / sug
gestions on ;have difficulty / trouble doing sth;二、常用句型精彩开头：1. I
know you are now having trouble …2. I’m glad to receive your lett
er asking for …3. Here are some tips to help you. Here are som
e suggestions for you.4. I think you can make it if you follow th
e advice below.. 主体常用语：1. Firstly, why not join a club? If you do
this, you can make friends.2. Secondly, you should / can try to
talk with others. Then / That way you can feel better.3. Thirdly,
it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music. B
y doing this, you will calm yourself down.4. Last but not least,
you should talk with her first. 常用结束语1. I hope you will find thes
e ideas useful.2. As time goes on, people will know you better an
d will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above
advice.3. I hope my advice will be of help to you.建议信 假设你是
李华，你的英国笔友Jack 刚刚升入高中，他有时感到困惑和沮丧，无法很快适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。 请你就此问题给他回一
封建议信， 内容主要包括：很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑，不必过多担心。2. 具体建议： 参加一些学校俱乐部， 结交更多的新朋友；制
作一份学习计划， 把注意力集中在学习上，作为一名青少年，好好读书是我们的责任。3. 希望建议对你有帮助。注意： 1. 可以适当增加
细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack, I’m sorr
y to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high schoo
l life. ……………………….
Yours,
Li Hua一、审题谋篇体裁： 应用文主题： 就高一新生的苦恼与求助给朋友的建议人称： 一、二为主时态：一般现
在时为主谋篇：段一委婉进行安慰，说明你对对方的理解，点明写作目的； 段二根据所给提示，帮助分析问题，给出具体建议；
段三希望建议能够对朋友有所帮助。二、要点翻译：1. _________, many freshmen ____
_____ so don’t worry about it too much.2. I __________ some scho
ol clubs _____________ make more new friends.3. ________________
your school life will become colorful and interesting.4. You shou
ld make a good study schedule and _______ it.5. As a teenager, __
__________ is also our duty.6. I hope my advice _________________
____.三、词句升级：1. 用短语改写句1；2. 用定语从句改写句23. 将句5改写成含有it 作形式主语的句子。4. 用介词短
语替换句6中的helpful .审题谋篇体裁： 应用文主题： 就高一新生的苦恼与求助给朋友的建议人称： 一、二为主时态：一般现在时
为主谋篇：段一委婉进行安慰，说明你对对方的理解，点明写作目的； 段二根据所给提示，帮助分析问题，给出具体建议；
段三希望建议能够对朋友有所帮助。四、连句成篇：Dear Jack, I am sorry to h
ear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life
. In fact, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so
don’t worry about it too much. I’m writing to offer you some usef
ul advice. First, I suggest that you join some school clu
bs, which can help you make more new friends. If so, you won’t fe
el lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesti
ng. Second, you should make a good study schedule and put your he
art into it. As a teenager, it is also our duty to read the book
well. I hope my advice will be of help to you.
Y
ours,
Li Hua Dear Jack, _________________ y
ou’re having trouble ________ your high school life._____________
_, many freshmen are confused _____ high school life, ___ don’t w
orry about it too much. _______________ you some useful advice.
_____________________ some school clubs, _____ can help you m
ake more new friends. _________, you won’t feel lonely and your s
chool life will become colorful and interesting. Second, you shou
ld make a good study schedule and put your heart into it. After
all, as a teenager, __________________________ the book well.
____________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua I am sorry to hear thatadjusting to As a matter of factabout soI’m writing to offer First, I suggest that you join whichIn that caseit is also our responsibility to read I hope my advice will be of help to you |
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