2024年高考英语第二轮复习之写作部分典例解析
应用文： 假如你是李华。期中考试临近，为帮助同学们缓解考前压力，上周一你班举行了一个主题为
“Stay Positive”的班会，请你以A Meaningful Event为题目为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.班会目的
2.班会过程3.班会影响注意：词数80； 可适当增加情节
主题为：方法一：..... a class meeting whose th
eme was“Stay Positive”last Monday .......方法二：........... a class
meeting with the theme “Stay Positive” last Monday .........为了：i
n order to =aiming to==so as to
第二段：活动（班会）影响/反响写法一：The _____turned out to be
a great success. Not only_______________, but it also____________
______. Through this activity, students benefited a lot. 写法二：The
____________ left a deep impression on us. In my opinion, it not
only________________but also _________________ . 写法三：The
_________was a real success, which offered_____________.The stud
ents benefited a lot from it. 读后续
写： I live in a small but lovely neighborhood. Our house is ne
ither large nor luxurious, but it has a fairly big garden. My fat
her loves his garden. He planted some seeds in it, and took good
care of the plants, watering them applying fertilizer, weeding an
d getting rid of bugs. He was never tired of doing all that stuff
. But at that time I didn’t understand why working in the dirt ex
cited him so much. Unfortunately, in the summer vacation bef
ore senior high school, my father was seriously injured in an acc
ident. He had to stay in bed for a while. My mother had several b
usiness trips, so she couldn’t take care of the garden. I didn''t
want my father to worry. I said that I would take care of his gar
den until he recovered. I assumed that the little plants would co
ntinue to grow as long as they had water, and luckily it rained f
airly often , so I didn''t think much about the garden . One
Saturday morning, my father said to me,“Christine, the vegetable
s should be about ready to be picked. Let’s have a salad today!”
I went out to the garden and was upset to see that many of the le
ttuce(生菜)leaves and carrots had been half eaten by bugs. There we
re hundreds of bugs all over them! I panicked for a moment b
ut then I quietly went to the nearest supermarket to buy some veg
etables. When I was making the salad, my mother came home and saw
the bag from the supermarket in the kitchen. I was embarrassed a
nd admitted, “Dad would like a salad, but the garden is a disaste
r. I don''t want to disappoint him, so I went to the store and bou
ght some vegetables” My mother smiled, saying, “Honey, you know w
hat is the right thing to do.” Paragraph 1My father seemed very p
leased when I took the salad to him.Paragraph 2Feeling guilty, I
decided to do the right thing读后续写：第一段：My father seemed very pleas
ed when I took the salad to him.关键字:爸爸看到并品尝沙拉后有何反应?“我”又是什么心情?建议:注
意父子之间的互动，情感等细节描写。第二段：Feeling guilty, I decided to do the right th
ing.关键：我”坦白真相，受到鼓励，将功补过，收获成长。建议:侧重动作和心理描写。改卷碰到的情况：思路一：1.爸爸品尝美食，很高
兴，一个劲儿在妈妈面前表扬我。2.我坦白错误，承认疏忽，爸爸不责备反而暖心安慰，让我大受感动。改卷碰到的情况：思路二：1.爸爸品尝
美食，但是发现破绽，随即询问。妈妈也看向我。2.我坦白错误，承认疏忽，爸爸不责备反而暖心安慰，让我大受感动。思路三：1.爸爸品尝美
食，很高兴，一个劲儿在妈妈面前表扬我。2.我坦白错误，承认疏忽，爸爸不责备反而暖心安慰，让我大受感动。自此，我每天都在爸爸的指导和
帮助下，学着爸爸的样子在菜园劳作。思路四：1.爸爸品尝美食，但是发现破绽，随即询问。妈妈也看向我。2.我坦白错误，承认疏忽，爸爸不
责备反而暖心安慰，让我大受感动。自此，我每天都在爸爸的指导和帮助下，学着爸爸的样子在菜园劳作。第一段参考句型以及表达：1.sb.
can’t wait to sth. 2.吃的表达：chewed slowly; ate sth. up;
enjoy3. 笑：There was a _________smile on his face.4.赞许：He
gave me a thumbs-up. He nodded his head and gave a
big smile. praise sb. 5. 尴尬/羞耻/难为情：Embarra
ssed and ashamed, I lowered my head .愧疚（1）sb’s face burned?She fe
lt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning. 她感到非常羞愧，脸都发红了
。（2）the blood rushed to sb’s face?So ashamed was she that she cou
ld feel the blood rush to her face. 她羞愧极了，觉得血都涌上了脸。难堪（1）sb’s face
turned redHis face turned red when his mother mentioned the girl
he secretly loved.（2）sb felt embassassed and awkwardWhen my gran
dmother kissed me in front of everyone, I felt embassassed and aw
kward.（3）sb’s face was burnt hotWhen my grandmother kissed me in
front of everyone, my face was burnt hot.（4）sb wanted to hide in
a holeWhen my grandmother kissed me in front of everyone, I wante
d to hide in a hole.紧张（1）sb had thousands of butterflies in the s
tomach.第二段参考句型以及表达：1.哭：with tears welling up in my eyes, I.......
... with tears rolling down my cheeks , I ............
2.三联动+语重心长：My father bent down, patted me on the shoulder and sai
d gently, “Don’t worry................”.My father bent down, held me into his arms and said genly, “Don’t worry ...........”.3.with the help of sb. ====under sb’s guidance4.照顾菜园子：去原文抄写5. 恢复健康/完全康复：My father gained/made a full recovery several days later. Several days later,my father recovered completely. |
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