2023年高考英语作文解析和范文全国甲卷适用地区：四川、广西、贵州（3省市）题目以英语讲述中国故事为主题的征文活动，请以一位中国历史人物为题
写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 人物事迹；2. 意义；3. 启示。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
。解析【文体综述】记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。在高考英语写作中，记叙文的命题形式主要是提纲式，提示
信息一般包括人物事迹及其对你的影响（写人）或活动时间、地点、目的、具体内容及活动感受（记事）等。这种写人、记事类半开放性记叙文，要
按照记叙文的六要素（时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果）安排内容，有一定的灵活性，把事件、人物或场景交代清楚即可。另外，文章要言之
有物，尊重事实，有中心，有重点，有逻辑。【审题分析】【思路点拨】这是一篇记叙文，要求介绍一位中国历史人物。这是一个半开放的作文题目
，题目中的内容要点只规定了一个大致方向，具体的人物和细节内容由学生自己来定。写作时，首先确定你要写的人物是谁，一定要写你熟悉的、了
解其事迹的历史人物。首段可以开门见山，直接点出你要介绍的人物。主体段介绍该人物的主要事迹及其影响。尾段说明该人物对于你的启示。写作
时，注意详略得当，重点突出。【参考范文】Dear Chris,As a history lover, many influenti
al historic figures are engraved in my mind. But what comes to my
mind is Confucius.Confucius, also known as Kong Qiu, was a Chine
se philosopher and politician who lived during the Spring and Aut
umn period. He is widely considered one of the most important fig
ures in Chinese history and his teachings have had a profound imp
act on Chinese culture and society. Confucius believed in the imp
ortance of education, morality, and social order. He emphasized t
he importance of respect for elders, loyalty to family, and the p
ursuit of knowledge. His teachings were compiled into a book call
ed the Analects, which has been studied and revered for centuries
. Confucius'' influence can still be seen in modern Chinese societ
y, where his teachings continue to be studied and applied in dail
y life.Best regards,Li Hua全国乙卷适用地区：内蒙古、陕西、甘肃、青海、宁夏、新疆、江西、河南（8省市）题
目请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾
已给出，不计入总词数。解析【文体综述】记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。在高考英语写作中，记叙文的命题形
式主要是提纲式，提示信息一般包括人物事迹及其对你的影响（写人）或活动时间、地点、目的、具体内容及活动感受（记事）等。这种写人、记事
类半开放性记叙文，要按照记叙文的六要素（时间、地点、人物、起因、经过、结果）安排内容，有一定的灵活性，把事件、人物或场景交代清楚即
可。另外，文章要言之有物，尊重事实，有中心，有重点，有逻辑。【审题分析】【思路点拨】本篇作文要求考生写一篇短文投稿。文章可分为三段
，首段可以讲述在什么时候学到的新技能；第二段详细叙述新技能的内容；最后一段描述自己从中获得的体验和感受。写作时可适当增加细节，并且
选用恰当的连接成分使文章结构清晰、语言流畅，过渡自然。【参考范文】The new skill I acquired was ska
ting. The process is challening but productive.Innitially, on wat
ching the Winter Olympics Games in Beijing, I became enthusiastic
about skating. From then on, I was determined to master this fas
cinating sport.However, at the very beginning, when I stepped on
the ice, Istumbled over myself. Hard as I strive,I stillfell over
again and again. The moment I thought of the athletes on the fie
ld, I was inspired by their powerful spirits. Eventually, my pers
istence and painstaking efforts paid off. I? can skate freely all
by myself.?From the learning experience, I fully understand that
only by diligent practicing can we overcome many kinds of diffic
ulties. And eventually, we can have a good command of what we des
ire to learn.新课标全国Ⅰ、II卷新课标全国I卷适用地区：山东、广东、湖南、湖北、河北、江苏、福建、浙江（8省市）新课
标全国II卷适用地区：辽宁、重庆、海南、云南、西藏、山西、安徽、吉林、黑龙江（9省市）题目假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语
培训班，将练习口语的所有学生随机挑选两人为一组进行练习，你对此有意见，请提出问题并给出建议，内容如下：1. 说明问题；2. 提出建
议。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。解析【文体综述】建议信是向别人提出合理的、可行的建
议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决特定问题的应用文体。注意写建议信时观点要合情合理，理由要充足、合理、有说服力。【审题分析】【思
路点拨】通过审题我们知道本题要求考生写一封建议信。建议的内容要合理、有说服力，语言要诚挚、礼貌。本建议信的框架结构可以安排如下：首
段：开门见山，表明写信目的——提建议。主体段：提出具体建议，鉴于篇幅所限，一般提两三个建议即可。考生可以从安排不同水平的学生结对练
习、不同话题采用不同练习方式等角度提出建议。尾段：表达希望和祝福。希望所提建议有用，希望口语培训班越办越好。【白金模板】【参考范文
】Dear teacher,I think it''s not a good idea to randomly pair up st
udents for the spoken English training class. I have a few reason
s for my opinion.Firstly, randomly pairing up students may lead t
o imbalanced language abilities within the groups. Some students
might have advanced speaking skills while others may struggle wit
h basic conversation. This can hinder the progress of both studen
ts as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leavin
g little room for the other student to improve.Secondly, students
may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if they are paired with
someone they don''t get along with or have difficulty communicati
ng with. Building a positive and comfortable learning environment
is crucial for effective language practice, and randomly assigni
ng pairs might undermine this.Instead, I suggest implementing a s
ystem where students can choose their own partners based on their
language abilities and personal preferences. This allows student
s to collaborate with someone they are comfortable with, ensuring
a supportive and productive learning environment.Yours,Li hua北京卷
题目假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京” 为主题的社团活动， 他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用
英文给他回复， 内容包括：1.活动形式；2.活动内容。注意：1.词数100 左右；2.开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。【参考范文
】Dear Jim,Delightedly hearing that you are planning a club activi
ty themed? "Green Beijing", I am writing to make my suggestions f
or the event.To beigin with, I suggest organizing a walking tour
around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing, which wil
l allow participants to experience the beauty of the city''s parks
and gardens while promoting eco-friendly transportation. Another
effective activity is planting trees to contribute to the city''s
green efforts.This could be a collaborative effort with local vo
lunteers or environmental organizations that are committed to the
preservation of Beijing''s natural environment.I hope these sugge
stions are helpful. I''m looking forward to participating in this
event and promoting environmental awareness together.?Best regard
s,Li Hua2023年上海卷假如你是明启中学高三学生吴磊，学校举办“快乐童年”展览，带一件展品，写展品介绍，要求描述展品及选择
原因。【参考范文】As a student of our school, I am excited to participate
in the upcoming English Festival by submitting a personal item fo
r the "Happy Childhood" exhibition. One item that holds a lot of
personal meaning to me is my first skateboard.I received the skat
eboard as a gift on my 7th birthday and it quickly became my favo
rite toy. It allowed me to explore the town with my friends and s
tay active outdoors. Through skateboarding, I gained confidence,
balance, and perseverance as I tried to perfect new tricks.In man
y ways, this skateboard represents more than just a fun childhood
memory. It is also a symbol of the skills that I developed throu
gh my childhood experiences. It reminds me to embrace challenges,
be adventurous, and never give up. I hope that by sharing my per
sonal story, others will be inspired to find joy and growth in th
eir own childhood hobbies and pursuits.Thank you for considering
my submission, and I look forward to seeing the "Happy Childhood"
exhibition come to life through the contributions of fellow stud
ents.Sincerely,Wu Lei2023年天津卷作为交换生去英国学校，学校要办一个促进中英文化交流的活动叫Chinese
worksshop，活动内容包括中国美食手工艺品和书法，并且活动有一项是教别人做中国传统的东西，写申请信；阐述这个中华文化的意义
，活动的意义和你想教什么，为什么想教这个。【参考范文】Dear Coordinator,I am excited to write
to express my interest in participating in the Chinese Workshop
event at your school. As an exchange student from China, I believ
e that cultural exchange between different countries is of great
importance, and I would be thrilled to contribute to this cause b
y sharing some of my own culture with the students at your school
.The Chinese Workshop event is a great opportunity for students t
o learn about Chinese culture through traditional cuisine, handic
rafts, calligraphy, and other interactive activities. In addition
to these components of the workshop, I would like to offer a ses
sion on teaching others how to make a popular Chinese paper-cutti
ng craft.Paper-cutting is an art form that has a long history in
China and is still widely practiced today. With its intricate des
igns and folkloric themes, it provides a fascinating window into
traditional Chinese culture. By teaching this craft to others, I hope to not only help them learn a new skill, but also to foster a greater appreciation of Chinese arts and heritage.I believe that events like the Chinese Workshop are crucial for promoting cross-cultural understanding and appreciation, and I am thrilled to have the opportunity to share my own skills and experiences as part of this effort. Thank you for considering my application, and I look forward to contributing to a successful and enriching event.Sincerely,Li Hua |
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