我的第一本英文作文书18：The Best Birthday Present for Me.我最喜欢的生日礼物

我的第一本英文作文书

Chapter 18：The Best Birthday Present for Me.我最喜欢的生日礼物

 

 

写作提示：1、你最喜欢的生日礼物是什么，因为它最贵，最实用？2、收到礼物的经过3、使用形容词的比较级和最高级等进行描写

 

第一段开头句：I have many birthday presents and the mp3 player is the best birthday present for me.

第二段开头句：The mp3 player is the birthday present for my ninth birthday.

第三段开头句：I still use it to play my favorite songs.

 

 

Peter的文章：

 

        I have many birthday presents and the mp3 player is the best birthday present for me. I have a lot of good presents, for example: baseball gloves, sneakers, a bike and some cool toys. The most expensive one is the well-known brown sneakers and the biggest one is the bike. But I still like the mp3 player more than any of my other presents.

        The mp3 player is the birthday present for my ninth birthday. I remember my mother told me that she forgot my birthday and didn't prepare any presents for me. I was so sad and I thought she didn't love me any more. But the end of the dinner, mum and dad took out a big box and it was a new mp3 player. What a surprise!

        I still use it to play my favorite songs. I love it so much. I will never buy a new one. No present in the world is better than it.

 

 

       我收过很多的生日礼物，其中我最喜欢的生日礼物是MP3随身听。我有很多的好礼物，例如：棒球手套，运动鞋，自行车和一些很酷的玩具。其中最贵的是一双棕色的名牌球鞋，而最大的是一辆自行车。不过，我依旧最很喜欢的还是那台mp3随身听。

       这个MP3随身听是我九岁的生日礼物。我记得妈妈告诉我，她忘了我的生日，什么也没准备。我那时很伤心，我还以为她不爱我了。但是在晚餐过后，爸妈拿出一个大盒子，里面就是那个MP3随身听。真是太令人惊喜了！

      如今我还是常常用它来播放我喜欢听的音乐。我真是太喜欢它了。我不会再买新的。它真是世界上最棒的生日礼物。