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改错练习18篇 Sep 1, 2013 博主写在前面：这是我从网上搜下来之后加以整理修改，并在两个班上集体使用了，效果不错，对学生帮助很大。这里衷心感谢提供题源的人。 (1) When I talked with the man, I found that from his childhood he develops the habit of carrying the book in his pocket all the time. He was used to read every minute when he had anything else to do. He found a book especial useful during the periods of waiting: waiting doctors, meals ,buses and so on.. That is how he found himself fifteen minute a day for reading. That was how she read twenty books a year---one thousand of books all his lifetime. (2) What a long winter vacation! I stay at home doing nothing except homework every day like robot. One day, a idea occurred to me: “Why not to find a part-time job to learn something new?” The next morning, after visit many shops, I was lucky enough to find one in a small but pretty cake shop. When a tired—looking old man came in to buy some cakes, I immediate helped him sit down in a chair and brought him the cake. After he paid them, I said thanks to him. He looked too happy that he praised me with a satisfied smile. From this , I learned: “Be good to others or they’ll be good to you.” (3) Good After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch". I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. "Excuse me," she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. "You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug (拥抱) you?" The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, "That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn't think she looked like Grandma. " "Neither did me," said Mother cheerfully.
(4) Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her except for that she was strange. She didn’t talk many. Her hair was black and purple, and she worn black sports shoes and a black sweater, even in the summer. She was, in fact, rather attractively, and she never seemed care what the rest of us thought about her. Like the rest of my classmate, I didn’t really want to get closest to her. It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand why Christine dressed the way she did . (5) My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I just thought it was funny! (6) I’m good all the subjects, and always ready help others. At school I get along well with my classmates. Therefore, I have a problem that troubles myself all the time. It’s the relationship among my deskmate and me. He is a hard-working student, who keeps school rule well. But he’s a person with a few words. What’s more, he got angry easily. I don’t know how to deal with him. Maybe it’s why we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings or thoughts. I value our friendship. I hope we can know more about each other and understand each other better. I do hope we will be close to each other than before.
(7) Although it was autumn, but it was snowing in Tibet. It was such cold that our legs felt like blocks of ice. On the late afternoon, we found that our water bottles froze because cold weather. But we still enjoyed us during the journey. At one point, we were surprising to find ourselves cycling through clouds. In the valleys colorful butterflies fly around us. It was a great fun to cycle down the hills as it gradual became much warmer. So we had to change our warm coats for T–shirt and shorts. (8) College student have a few ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart this, many good students can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I only let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students maths, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship. (9) I am angry about the act of dishonest in exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student or I’ve never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, I caught by my English teacher. Because she was one of my favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at the moment. I thought cheat would help me keeps my straight A’s. Little I know that I was hurting not only me but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own, by do their best, but not by cheating.
(10) Friendship is very important. Everyone need friendship. In all our lives we can’t live with friendship just as we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties. But real friendship is no easy to come about. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher. By a friend’s advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves. (11) My secret of staying young is simple: keeping your mind awake and you will stay young all over. Take an interest in world around you, and learn at least one new thing every day. Don’t think that you are ever too old go back to school. I know a man who entered medical college in 70. He get his degree with honors and became a famous doctor. Other man went to law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say that stay young is easy only for those live in the future. In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind awake and active, which is the only way to be always young. (12) My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. Has my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend any training class but learned it all by myself. Strangely, I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), it can keep me float. Thinking of this, I feel quite satisfying.
(13) In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong was going on her way to school happily then suddenly she felt the street was violent shaking. The trees were torn up and many buildings are leaning down to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by fallen buildings. She was knocked down by a tree before she knew. Two doctors carried him to safety and she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she recovered. Seeing such many goods from the mainland of China and other country, she believed all the destroyed houses would be built. (14) I’m glad to write to you. It is near a month since you had left our hospital. I’m still worried about you. How are you get along these days? I think you may be much better now, but you’d better have a good rest and take good care of you since you are sixty-year-old man. I still remember those days which you helped me to my English. In your help, I make good progress. To my regret, my English is still not good enough though I have made good use of my time. Can you give me some advices on it? (15) One day I was dining with my friend Zhou in a McDonald then two young girls came in hand in hand. While enjoyed a hamburger, I found Zhou staring something with curiosity. I rose my eyes to see what was happening. The two girls are making gestures skillfully. Obviously they were deaf-mutes. I had learned some sign languages ago, so I showed various gestures with Zhou following me in high spirit. We played and laughed cheerfully as if there were no one else present. Suddenly we saw both the girls glaring at us. Before we could explain them, they had walked out angrily, left the food unfinished. They thought we were making fun of them. How I regretted!
(16) We often think insects to be harmless. This is part true. Many an insect are harmful. Flies carry diseases. Others insects carry diseases, too. Farmers are at war with insects most the time. Hunger insects kill crops in the fields. Farmers spray the field as to get rid of these insects. Do this mean that all insects are harmful? No. Many are of great helpful to man. Bees make honey. Without bees and other insects, many tree would have no fruit. Silkworms make silk. Some insects eat other insects that kill fruit trees. (17) Today we were organized for a short trip to the West Hill. We set out by the school bus at 7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasure and every one of us was excited. After two hour’s ride, we arrived there at nine thirty. We began our programs the moment we got off from the bus. We played games on the hillside and swim in the river. After that we had our picnic lunch. In the afternoon we walked along the river, that winds around the hills. We took a lot of photo and enjoyed ourselves very much. Time past quickly and we had to go back. It was past five o’clock then we returned school. What a good trip we had today! I’ll never forget it. (18) It’s important of us to keep good eyesight. But do you know what to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work long . You’d better have a rest, looking in the long distance after you’ve studied an hour and so. Second, pay attention for the following: Don’t read in the sun or in a poor light; don’t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when read you should keep a book away from your eye for a foot. Third, do eye-exercises every day, that will also help you keeps good eyesight. If you obey the rules, I think, you may prevent yourself from become short-sighted.
短文改错答案 (1) When I talked with the man, I found that from his childhood he develops the developed habit of carrying the book in his pocket a all the time. He was used to read every reading minute when he had anything else to do. nothing He found a book especial useful during especially the periods of waiting: waiting ^ doctors, for meals ,buses and so on. That is how he was found himself fifteen minute a day minutes for reading. That was how she read he twenty books a year-----one thousand of 删除 books all his lifetime. (2) What a long winter vacation! I stay stayed at home doing nothing except home
work every day like ^robot. a One day, a idea occurred to me: “Why an
not to find a part-time job to learn 删掉 something new?” The next morning,
after visit many shops, I was lucky visiting enough to find one in a small but pretty
cake shop. When a tired—looking old
man came in to buy some cakes, I
immediate helped him sit down in a immediately
chair and brought him the cake. After cakes he paid^ them, I said thanks to him. He for looked too happy that he praised me so with a satisfied smile. From this , I
learned: “Be good to others or they’ll and be good to you.”
(3) After shopping, Mother and I went to a
restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother noticed looking at a nearby table occupy by occupied an elderly woman and ∧ young a couple. They ate silently, and it was
clearly that things were not going well. clear As we left, Mother stopped on their by/at table. "Excuse me," she said, put her arm putting around the unhappy old woman. "You
remind me so many of my mother. much May I hug (拥抱) you?" The woman
smiled happily as she accepted to it. 删掉 After we left, I said, "That was very
nice of you, Mother. So I didn't think But she looked like Grandma. " "Neither
did me," said Mother cheerfully. I (4) Christine was just a girl in one of my classes. I never knew much about her
except
didn’t talk many. Her hair was black much and purple, and she worn black sports wore shoes and a black sweater, even in the
summer. She was, in fact, rather
attractively, and she never seemed attractive but ^care what the rest of us thought to about her. Like the rest of my classmate classmates , I didn’t really want to get closest to her. close It was only when we did their our chemistry project together that I begin to began understand why Christine dressed the
way she did . (5) My sister saw a lovely cup when we are were shopping the other day. She liked it at
once. Then she bent down and picked ^ it up to look at a price on it. As she did this the , lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had her to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked hard face! My sister wanted ^ get out of the to shop as fast as she could when a shop
assistant came over to us. It w\as turned
out t o be her own cup, that she’d left on which the shelf by mistake. The assistant was
clearly as embarrassing as my sister, embarrassed for I just thought it was funny! And
(6) I’m good ^all the subjects, and at always ready^ help others. At school I to get along well with my classmates.
Therefore, I have a problem that troubles However myself all the time. It’s the relationship me among my deskmate and me. He is a between hard-working student, who keeps school
rule well. But he’s a person with a few rues 删掉 words. What’s more, he got angry easily. gets I don’t know how to deal with him.
Maybe it’s why we’ve seldom sat down because to exchange our feelings or thoughts. I
value our friendship. I hope we can
know more about each other and
understand each other better. I do hope
we will be close to each other than closer before. (7) Although it was autumn, but it was 去掉 snowing in Tibet. It was such cold that so our legs felt like blocks of ice. On the In late afternoon, we found that our water
bottles froze because ^cold weather. of But we still enjoyed us during the ourselves journey. At one point, we were
surprising to find ourselves cycling surprised through clouds. In the valleys colorful
butterflies fly around us. It was a great flew 删掉 fun to cycle down the hills as it gradual gradually
became much warmer. So we had to change our warm coats for T–shirt and T-shirts shorts.
(8) College student have a few ways to pay students their college fees. Many students have
their parents to pay the fees. Some 删掉 students may apply to a bank loan and for others will try to find part-time jobs in
and out of the campus. Apart ∧this, from many good students can win a
scholarship. By this way they can pay In at least part of the fees. As to me, I only
let my parents pay half of their fees my because they are ∧ rich enough. not Beside my study, I will take up a Besides part-time job by teach some high teaching school students math, physics,
chemistry and English, as I’m very
good at these important subjects. Of
course I will also work very hard at my
lessons in order to I can easily win a that scholarship.
(9) I am angry about the act of dishonest in dishonesty exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student or ∧ I’ve never cheated. I that once write the answer on my hand for a wrote history test but unluckily I∧ caught was by my English teacher. Because she
was one of my favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at the moment. I thought cheat would cheating help me keeps my straight A’s. Little∧I keep did know that I was hurting not only me myself but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own , on by do the best they can, but not by cheating. doing (10) Friendship is very important. Everyone need friendship. In all our lives we can’t needs live with friendship just as we can’t live without without air and water. Friendship makes
us getting on well with one another get to go ahead under different kind of kinds difficulties . But real friendship is no not easy to come about. True friendship
must be sincerely and be based on sincere
understand each other . A good friend understanding can always be a good teacher . By a friend’s advices we are persuading to go advice persuaded the right way. Therefore ∧ more the friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves. (11) My secret of staying young is simple:
keeping your mind awake and you will keep stay young all over. Take an interest in
∧ world around you, and learn at least the one new thing every day. Don’t think
that you are ever too old ∧ go back to to school. I know a man who entered
medical college in 70. He get his degree at got with honors and became a famous doctor
. Other man went to law school at 71 Another and is now a active lawyer. You may say an that stay young is easy only for those staying live in the future. In fact, you can do it living或在live前加who whether you care enough to try to keep if your mind awake and active, which is the only way to be always young. (12) My swimming experience is extreme extremely interesting. There was a time when I
swim like a rock. This went on till one swam day when I was fishing with a friend of
mine at ∧ nearby pond. I slipped a into one. Has my friend not come to my it Had
rescue, I would have been drowned.
Ever since then, I had come to know the have importance of learning to swim. I didn’t
attend any training class but learned it all
by myself. Strangely, I have no
difficult swimming at all now. Though difficulty the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), looks at least it can keep me float. Thinking of floating this, I feel quite satisfying. satisfied (13) In a summer night in Taiwan, Xiao Hong On was going on her way to school happily
then suddenly she felt the street was when violent shaking. The trees were torn up violently and many buildings are leaning down were to the ground. Even a car was destroyed by fallen buildings. She was knocked falling down by a tree before she knew ∧. it Two doctors carried him to safety and her she was settled down in a tent for treatment. After some time, she recovered. Seeing such many goods so from the mainland of China and other country, countries she believed all the destroyed houses would be built. rebuilt (14) I’m glad to write to you. It is near a nearly month since you had left our hospital. 去掉had
I’m still worried about you. How are you
get along these days? I think you may be getting much better now, but you’d have a
good rest and take good care of you yourself since you are ∧ sixty-year-old man. I a still remember those days which you when helped me to my English. In your help, I with With make good progress. To my regret made , my English is still not good enough
though I have made good use of my time. Can you give me some advices on it? advice (15) One day I was dining with my friend Zhou in a McDonald then two young when girls came in hand in hand. While
enjoyed a hamburger, I found Zhou enjoying staring ∧ something with curiosity. at I rose my eyes to see what was raised happening. The two girls are making were gestures skillfully. Obviously they were deaf-mutes. I had learned some sign languages ago, so I showed various before gestures with Zhou following me in high spirit. spirits We played and laughed cheerfully as if there were no one else present. was Suddenly we saw both the girls glaring at us. Before we could explain∧ them, to they had walked out angrily, left the leaving food unfinished. They thought we were
making fun of them. How I regretted! (16) We often think insects to be harmless. harmful This is part true. Many an insect are partly is harmful. Flies carry diseases. Others Other insects carry diseases, too. Farmers are at war with insects most ∧ the of
time. Hunger insects kill crops in the Hungry fields Farmers spray the field ∧ as to so get rid of these insects. Do this mean Does that all insects are harmful? No. Many are of great helpful to man. Bees make help honey. Without bees and other insects, many tree would have no fruit. trees Silkworms make silk. Some insects eat other insects that kill fruit trees. (17) Today we were organized for a short trip to the West Hill. We set out by the in school bus at 7:30 a.m. The weather was pleasure and every pleasant one of us was excited After two hour's ride, we hours’ arrived there at nine thirty. We began our programs the moment we got off from the bus. We played games on the 去掉 hillside and swim in the river. After that swam we had our picnic lunch. In the afternoon we walked along the river, that winds which around the hills. We took a lot of photo photos and enjoyed ourselves very much. Time past quickly and we had to go back. Passed It was past five o’clock then we returned when ∧ school. What a good trip we had to today! I’ll never forget it. (18) It’s important of us to keep good for eyesight. But do you know what to how protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work long . You’d better have working a rest, looking into the distance after you’ve studied an hour and so. or Second, pay attention for the following: to Don’t read in the sun or in a poor light;
don’t read in bed or in a moving bus. And when read you should keep a book reading away from your eye for a foot. eyes Third, do eye-exercises every day, that which will also help you keeps good eyesight. keep If you obey the rules, I think, you may prevent yourself from become becoming short-sighted.
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