如何描写地方类作文介绍地理位置的说明文，它的写作顺序建议如下: 地面气城著(地名) 应介绍这个地方的地（地理位置）.面（面积，人口），气（气候状况），城（两个著名城市），著（与众不同之处） 写说明文,时态以现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。 地点表达的常用句型要记好。如： 1.地点状语+,+主句 /(历史) (分词结构做状语） 2 Located in…, ×××is a city…with a history of… 2 lie in\on... 2 ...lies near\behind\in front of\by the side of...\between\among... 2 ...stands at the foot of\on the top of... 2 With sp. on/to the east/west/north\ …borders … to the south\ west\east\south e.g. China, located/ lying in the east of Asia, is one of largest countries in the world, with/bordering Japan to the east and Russia on the north. 2.面积+人口 （with结构做定语） …covers/takes up a total area of …with a population of …. …has a population of…, … is a city with a population of… e.g. (1) Beijing, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000. (2) Our school, which takes up 63 thousand square kilometers, is very large in size. 3.气候特征（注意表示天气变化的形容词） 2 It is warm all the seasons (warm, dry, cold，sunny, rainy…)四季温暖。 2 it's like spring all the year round. 四季如春。 2 People in sp. can enjoy typical tropical cimate(典型的热带气候), which is so pleasan that every year, many tourists come here to enjoy the beautiful scenery, among which…is the most popular. 2 The average temperature ranges between 23℃ and 39℃. 4.历史和文化名城(with 结构作定语) 2 …has a history of… 2 …with a history of… e.g. China has a history of over 5,000 years. Egypt is an Arabian country with a long history. 5.著名特殊之处 注意词组的润 2 ××× is famous for… 2 The special character of ××× is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world. 1）The places around our city are rich in natural /traveling resources. 2)The city, known as…, attracts millions of visitors from all over the world. 4)The city is home to … e.g. Guangzhou is rich in traveling resources, such as the famous “eight scenery of YangCheng”. 常见描写地点的篇章模板 a) Located in…, ×××is a city (place, province…) with a history of… b) ×××lies in the southwest of ... c) It covers/has a total area of 7,686,850 square kilometers with a population of 2.8million d) It is warm (dry, cold,sunny,rainy...) e) Because××× is famous for/ is well known for …, the tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery f) The special character of ××× is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world. g) It has many world-famous places of interest, such as... and....
本次段考作文赏析： Sample 1: I’d like to tell you something about our city. You’ve made the wise choice to travel here.Nanjing, the capital of Jiangsu Province, lies in the southeast of China with an area of 6587 square kilometers. It has a population of about 5 million. The city has a history of more than 2,400 years, and was once the capital of ten dynasties. **It is a very beautiful city with a lot of places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City. It also has many modern factories and high buildings. **Besides, the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable. I’m sure you will have a good time here. Thank you. Sample 2: Nanjing, the capital city of Jiangsu Province, which is located in the southeast of China, covers an area of 6,587 square kilometers with a population of about 5 million. The city has a long history of over 2,400 years, which was the capital city of ten dynasties in the history, like the Eastern Jin Dynasty and Ming Dynasty. ** It is so rich in places of interest, such as the Xuanwu Lake, the Jiming Temple and the Stone City that it attracts a large number of tourists from at home and abroad. Bisides, many modern factories and high buildings are seen everywhere. ** Most importantly, people can enjoy the pleasant climate all the year around and the convenient transportation available can make you enjoy the beautiful scenery in the city easily. 根据下面表格信息，写一篇介绍西藏的用短文，字数在120左右。
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Located in …, ×××is one of … 2. 属于 belong to 3. 有……人口 have / with a population of 4. 面积/占地…平方公里 It covers/ has a total area of …square kilometres. 5. 有……年悠久的历史 have / with a long history of … 6. 以……著名 be famous for 7. 被誉为 be known / honoured as 8. 自从……解放以来 since the liberation of ××× Since ××× was liberated, … 9. 在……方面取得很大的进步have made great progress in… 10. 在…方面取得了令人瞩目的进步 have witnessed significant progress
谋篇: 用适当的连贯词使文章语篇连贯. 1. 归属: 中华人民共和国 地理位置: 中国西南方，被誉为世界屋脊(Roof of the World) Tibet, known as the “Roof of the World”, belongs to the People’s Republic of China and it is located in the southwest of China. 2. 人口: 约2，800，000 面积: 120多万平方公里 It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering more than 1.2 million square kilometers. 3. 省会: 拉萨 (Lhasa)，被誉为世界上最高的城市 The capital city is Lhasa, which is honoured as “The highest city” in the world. 4. 特征: 700多年的悠久历史；风景秀丽，有很多享誉海内外的名胜古迹，如布达拉宫。 With a long history of more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. 5. 1951年5月23日解放以来，西藏在政治、经济(economy)、文化等方面都取得了很大的进步。 Since The liberation of Tibet on May 23, 1951, it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture.
Tibet, known as the “Roof of the World”, belongs to the People’s Republic of China and it is located in the southwest of China. It has a population of about 2.8 million, covering more than 1.2 million square kilometers. The capital city is Lhasa, which is honoured as “The highest city” in the world. With a long history of more than 700 years, Tibet has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace. Since The liberation of Tibet on May 23, 1951, it has witnessed significant progress in politics, economy and culture.
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