高中英语作文常见错误A.句子结构错误之缺主语: I had an idea that made a meal in person. (I had an idea that I would make a meal myself.) B.句子结构错误之缺动词 We are supposed to send love to our mothers when we outside.(when we are outside) C.句子结构错误之无主句 Hearing the news that 36 died in Shanghai, which made the country sad.( Hearing the news that 36 died inShanghai, the whole country felt sad.) D.句子结构之中式英语： 1.His father died from an accident, depend on his mother raised him up. (His father died from an accident, and he had to depend on his mother for a living.) 2.His mother in order to save a few money away ten kilometers of road. (In order to save a little money, his mother covered ten kilometers.) Having the mother’s exist and love , the world become more and more better. (With mothers’ existence and love, the world becomes better and better.) E.连词使用不当 She thanked her mother raised her to see the world.( She thanked her mother and raised her to see the world) F.动词错误之时态不当： I love my mother because she give me life.(gave) G.动词错误之形式错误: 1.I want to make a difference on her birthday for thank her. (thanking) 2.The author mainly tell us that the author is loved her mother.(tells, loves) H.动词错误之语态不当 I.名词单复数不一致 Finally we should respect our mother. (mothers) J. 单数可数名词前缺限定词 Then mother sent umbrella tome.(my mother, an umbrella) K.单词拼写错误: My mother makes me felling love.(feel) L.单词词性不当: 1.Nothing can instead of it.(replace) 2.My mother appeared when I felt sadly.(sad) M.内容不全 N.介词使用不当 The passage mainly tells us that a girl conveyed emotion to her mother in her mother’s birthday.(on) |
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