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三步进阶法 两步成篇 一、词汇对接 二、巧用句式 三、句式升级 四、连句成篇 五、实战演练 。 下面以话题类的应用文为例来讲。 假定你是李华，得知一所英语学校招聘助教，帮助外教组织教学。请用英语给该校写一封邮件应聘。内容主要包括： 1. 个人简介 2. 个人优势：口语能力； 组织能力；沟通能力。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。 Dear Sir / Madam , I’ve learned a teaching assistant for foreign teachers is wanted in your school.
Yours Li Hua 一、 词汇对接
2. 从…毕业 ____________________ 3. 接触英语 ________________________ 4. 精通口语 __________________ 5. 一个出色的组织者_________________ 6. 赢得某人的信任 ___________ 7. 激情 ____________________________ 8. 责任感 ______________________ 9. 合格的 __________________________ 10. 毫无疑问 __________________ 答案： 1. apply for 2. graduate from 3. be exposed to English 4. have a good command / knowledge / grasp of spoken English 5. a brilliant organizer 6. win one’s trust 7. enthusiasm 8. a sense of responsibility 9. qualified 10. undoubtedly 二、巧用句式 1.我写信申请这个职位。 I ______________________ to apply for the position. 2. 自从小时候我就开始学英语。 I _____________________________________since a young age. 3. 我口语很好，可以自由地和其他人用英语交流。 I _______________________________________ and can ________________________others in English. 4. 多年当班长的经历使我成为一个出色的组织者。 Years of experiences of monitor _________________________________________________. 5. 这大大有助与我维持班级秩序。 It will ___________________________________________________________________. 6. 如果你能考虑我的申请并且给我一个机会，我将不胜感激。 I would _________________________________ you can take my application into consideration and give me a chance. 三、句式升级 升级1 : 用非谓语动词连接2、3句。 ________________________________________________________________________ 升级2 ：用定语从句连接4、5 句。 __________________________________________________ 答案： 升级1 : Having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I have a good command of spoken English and can communicate freely with others in English. 升级2 ： Years of experience of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the class in order. 四、连句成篇 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案： Dear Sir/Madam, I’ve learned a teaching assistant for foreign teachers is wanted in your school. I’m writing to apply for the position. First of all, I had just graduated from Hebei University. Having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I have a good command of spoken English and can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of experience of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the class in order. The most important factor is that I love kids, and I’m confident that my patience and care will undoubtedly win their trust. All in all, I think my enthusiasm and full sense of responsibility will make me a qualified teaching assistant. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and give me a chance. Best wishes. Yours Li Hua 亮点点评：本文是应用文中的申请信，本文的亮点有：结构明晰，逻辑严密，恰当地运用了过渡词first of all , what’s more , all in all。语言上运用了较高级词汇和较复杂句式，如：be exposed to ; have a good command of ; a brilliant organizer ; qualified ; win one’s trust; undoubtedly 等； 运用了非谓语动词作状语，非限制性定语从句。 模板背诵： 1. I’m writing to apply for the position as… 2. I think….will make me a qualified… 3. I appreciate it if …. . 五、实战演练 你是李华，你校广播台招聘英语播音员的启事引起了你的兴趣，请根据下列信息用英文向广播台台长Liu Yue写一封申请信。 姓名：李华 性别：男 年龄：18 年级：高三 兴趣：唱歌、写作、户外运动 其他: 活泼、开朗、精力充沛；曾获省高中生英语演讲比赛二等奖 应聘目的：参加社会实践活动，丰富业余生活 注意：1. 可根据需要适当增加细节 2. 词数：100—120. 信的开头、结尾已给出。 Dear Liu Yue, I’m writing to apply for the English announcer of our school broadcasting station. I am looking forward to hearing from you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案： Dear Liu Yue, I’m writing to apply for the English announcer of our school broadcasting station. I’m Li Hua , a boy of eighteen, presently in my third year of high school. I’m outgoing and energetic. I’m interested in singing , allowing me to relax myself and entertain others. Last year I won the second prize in the English speech competition for senior high school students in our province. Besides, writing is my strength , which might be helpful for the work. Taking part in all kinds of outdoor activities is also one of my hobbies. All in all, I think my experience and advantages will make me a qualified English announcer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration and give me a chance. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua |
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