如何写出模板英语作文？

比起800字的语文作文，写出100词的英语作文其实并不难，但相信不少人都遇到过这种情况：英语作文写着写着就没话说了。为了艰难的凑够字数，只好开始编词凑句，胡乱堆砌那些背好的高级短语和句式，或是直接糊弄两句草草结束了。

毋庸置疑，这样写出来的“没有灵魂”的作文，是拿不到高分的。

那么如何才能快速高效的写作并取得高分呢？

今天为大家分享高级教师庞永升老师的英文写作秘籍，干货满满，不容错过！

首先，我们再来一起看一遍高考英语高分作文（21-25分）的评分要求：

1. 全部完成了试题规定的任务；

2. 覆盖所有内容要点；

3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；

4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致，具备较强的语言运用能力；

5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；

6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。

以上要求可以归纳概括为内容结构完整、高级词汇和语法结构运用得当、文段语句连接自然。

在实际写作过程中我们应该怎么做呢？

重点是把握文章内容结构。通常情况下我们可以按照“总-分-总”的形式将文章划分为三段。

★ 第一段开门见山，提出自己的观点；

★ 第二段摆出事实或者依据，详列事情发展的过程；

★ 最后一段，得出结论或总结。

但具体划分为几段，还要根据实际情况的需要。

相比于段落，语句间的过渡词更加重要。过渡词犹如润滑剂，恰当是使用可以使文章结构清楚、文字连贯流畅。

常见的连接词汇

1. 提出观点 As far as I am concerned in my opinion from my point of view	2. 表示转折 However Whereas
3. 表示递进 What is more moreover More importantly	4. 表事实上 In fact Actually
5. 表总结 As a result All in all	6. 表因此 Therefore Consequently
7. 表因为 As a result of Thanks to Owing to	8. 表虽然 Although In spite of
9. 表示比较 Compared with	10. 表最后 Finally Eventually In the end

好的文章不是词汇的简单堆砌，而是高级句式结构的恰当组合运用。

句式结构

1. 表示原因 The reasons for this are as follows We have good reason to believe that

2. 表示好处 It is of great benefit to us It does us a lot of good

3. 表示重要、必要 We think it necessary to do sth It plays an important role in our life

4. 表示措施 We should take some effective measures

5. 表示事实、现状 This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in

6. 表示比较 Compared with A，B...... There is a striking contrast between them

7. 表示看法 People have different attitude towards sth Some people believe that ...Others argue that

巧妙地把词汇和语法结构结合起来，才能形成高级的语言表达形式。

例

1. Let’s work together to make our world a better place.

让我们一起努力把世界变得更加美好。

2. In the past 10 years,great changes have taken place in our school.

在过去的10年里，我们的学校发生了巨大的变化。

3. The job was hard,which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.

这份工作太辛苦，差点使我半途而废。

4. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.

在校园里，学生使用手机的趋势在增加。

5. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.

敬盼早日回复。

6. I’m looking forward to meeting you in no time.

我期待与你早日相见。

7. No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important. 

不管你将来做什么，英语都是最重要的。 

8. Nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有什么比接受教育更重要的事了。 

9. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I’d be more than happy to be your guide. 

如果你有空闲时间我的家乡做客，我会非常乐意做你的导游。

10. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.

对于该问题的看法因人而异。 

11. I’m very satisfied with what we have achieved so far. 

到目前为止，我对我们取得的成绩很是满意。 

12. Early to bed and early to rise does good to your health.

早睡早起有益于健康。

13. More and more people are aware that it is important to obey the traffic rules. 

越来越多的人意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。

14. With the increasingly rapid economic growth, more problems are brought to our attention. 

随着日益迅速的经济发展，更多的问题受到我们的关注。 

15. I suggest the department concerned taking some effective measures to improve the present situation. 

我建议有关部门采取一些有效措施改善现状。 

高考真题案例解读

（2019全国卷I）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的：2.个人优势：3.能做的事情。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。

答案

    I'm Li Hua, an outgoing boy, who is studying in London. I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team, having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city. I have some advantages for the job.

    First of all, having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. Besides, having a good knowledge of Chinese paintings because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least，through my introduction and efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

庞老师为您解读

一、详解

1.审题立意

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。

2.谋篇布局

书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。

3.关键词

根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，local city，advantages，a good command of，beneficial for，familiarity with，appreciate ，take my application into consideration。

通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all, Besides, to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。

二、点睛

本文首段开门见山，表达了写信的目的。

第2段详细介绍了个人的优势和能做的事情：

an outgoing boy, who is studying in London.

——此处使用了同位语和非限制性定语从句。

having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city.——使用了分词做状语和宾语从句及被动语态。

having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child, I have a good command of English and Chinese, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.

——使用了分词和非限制性定语从句。

其中，First of all, Besides, Last but not least的使用使文章富有条理性。

此外，还使用了高级句式结构，如I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration条件状语从句。

三、思路点拨

无论是在学校还是今后读大学再到走上工作岗位，写好一份申请都是你必不可少的一项技能。

这种形式的写作，学生需结合自身优势。考生成文时应注意：

1. 要点要齐全：(1)提出写信的目的——申请做这个志愿者；(2)提出个人优势；(3)表达出自己能做的事情。

2. 时态：以一般现在时为主。

3. 人称：第二人称为主。

4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。

5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。

四、参考范文

Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old teenager studying in London. Learning that a volunteer is needed for an exhibition of Chinese traditional painting , I am writing to apply for it.

    I have some advantages for the job. First of all, having lived in China for years and learnt English since I was a child , I have a good command of both English and Chinese, which is beneficial when introducing Chinese paintings to foreign friends. Besides, because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it. Last but not least, through my efforts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England.

    I would appreciate it if this wonderful chance would be offered to me. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

 Li Hua