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目前英语卷的题型的改革力度是够大的，说来就来。这不，各种证据证明，未来作文会变成文章续写，即：给一篇350词左右的记叙文给你，结尾没有，让考生自由发挥。限制是:需要用上文章里给定的五个左右的词语。目前浙江已经明确在考试说明中说了，后面的高考就要采用这种形式。 这种改革给考生一种恐慌，为什么呢？因为从未写过这样的文章，而且续写听起来好高大上。但是，我看来，这种作文最好发挥。我给出的技巧是：内容上要注意两个转折；语言上要注意倒装和非谓语动词；另外，我给考生们准备了万能的九个小词库。 一、何为内容上的两个转折 写记叙文，英汉是同理的。故事要有曲折即：twist。而高考作文150作文只能让你写顶多两个曲折。曲折分：情节曲折和心理变化的曲折。 英语作文毕竟和语文作文有差别，我们的曲折不要一味追求离奇，而是讲究逻辑的连贯。 二、语言的运用 记叙文是动作和语言的干活，不需要你写复杂句，这是文体的需要。常用的是：非谓语动词和倒装句。为什么呢？因为只有这两种语法结构句子才能表达动作的多样性。 三、关于九个小词库 我认为记叙文的心情描写是伴随着动作一起的，你有什么样的心情就有什么样的动作。笔者平时有摘抄各种文学作品的佳句和词块的习惯。仅挑选一小部分，省略了伴随心情的手、脚、脸等词库，进行粗线条的概括。虽然不多，但我认为也足够应付高考了。我将它们分为九大类： 一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中： 二、如何表达同情和关心 三、如何表达轻松 四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情 五、如何表达胆小、害怕 六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬 七、如何表达悲伤 八、如何表达疲劳 九、如何表达疼痛 四、实战演练 （这道题是浙江考试说明上的例子，但没有给答案） 
步骤一：
第一个转折： The young man; suitcases in the back seat;loud noise of an alarm; the bank; robbery; the shouts; people; the bank thief 报警：群众拦阻；警察赶到 心情：害怕；困惑；疼痛 第二个转折： 真相：一箱书；赶往学校报到 心情：生气；轻松；关心 步骤二： He dared not stop and dashed to the crowd.He was struck dead with terror. His heart was beating painfully fast and banging against his ribs. However, hearing the shouts, several strong young men in front of the bank blocked and arrested him. Now, every nerve in Authur’s body warned him not to go any further. “I doubt that guy is the bank thief.” said Authur, pointing the man behind.[用非谓语动词] The anger had returned like a hard lump at the back of his throat. Luckily, just then up came the policemen[倒装句]. Authur began to calm down, his breathing growing slower.[用非谓语动词] He could feel the blood surging round his body and releasing the tension. When the suitcases were opened, many books came in sight. The young man gave Authur a look of concern, saying“I really hope you are not hurt. Maybe we can be friends.” Both of them smiled. (划线部分都是来自九小词库） 五、九小词库【以下均摘自文学作品，部分词汇需要你查词典理解】 一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中：
词语：
Nouns Thoughts, concentration, determination
Verbs Felt, tried, resolved, determined
Heard, remembered
词块：
* Deep in thought
* Lost in her own thoughts
* Tried desperately to remember
* Heard little of what was being said around her
* Nothing was going to stop him now
* Felt a hard ball of determination tightening in his stomach
佳句：
She tried desperately to remember where she had seen him before.
She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.
He shuddered and tensed, as a hard ball of determination tightened in his stomach.
二、如何表达同情和关心
词语：
Nouns Face, mouth, smile, eyebrows
Concern, sympathy, comfort, warmth
Adjectives Soft, warm, calm, sympathetic, comforting
Verbs Gave, flashed
Drew, turned
词块：
* Face turned soft and sympathetic
* Gave her a look of concern
* Drew her eyebrows together
* Mouth turned down at the corners
* Flashed a comforting smile
佳句：
His face turned soft and sympathetic and his voice sank to a murmur.
She drew her eyebrows together and turned her mouth down in a look of concern.
三、如何表达轻松
词语：
Nouns Heart, pulse, blood
Chest, head, brow, scalp, sweat
Adjectives Calm, grateful
Verbs Eased, slowed, calmed, released ached
词块：
* Pounding eased in her chest
* Breathing slowed
* Rapid beat of her heart became calmer
* Sweat dried on her brow
* Blood surged round her body
* Released the tension in her body
* Grateful for his narrow escape
佳句：
She began to calm down and her heart started to slow, but the panic had left an ache in her head and a ringing in her ears.
Slowly, the pounding eased in her chest and the sweat dried on her brow.
She could feel the blood surging round her body and releasing the tension.
Her breathing grew slower, as a new calm settled over her.
四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情
词语：
Nouns Heart, pulse, breath, throat
Anger, rage, fury, temper, wrath, disgust, contempt, resentment
Adjectives Cross, furious, raging
Jealous, envious, resentful
Irritating, frustrating
Bitter, vicious, poisonous
Breathless, sweating
Verbs Swept, poured
Pounded, exploded, erupted
Shook, trembled, writhed
Raced, hammered
Clenched, gripped
词块：
* Red mist
* Spitting bundle of rage
* Vicious flash of temper
* Hard lump at the back of her throat
* Left him breathless
* Made his heart race
* Hammered in his head
* Swept through him like a tidal wave
* Burning with rage
* Wrath exploded like a volcano
* Poured from her like an acid
* Surrounded him like a foul stench
* Poisoned the air around him
佳句：
He was sweating and burning with rage.
She saw his face through narrowed eyes and a fog of rage.
Her reply fuelled his anger and he erupted like a volcano.
The anger had returned like a hard lump at the back of her throat.
His fury knew no limits – one vicious flash of temper after another.
Her rage swept through her like a tidal wave, surrounding her like a foul stench.
五、如何表达胆小、害怕
词语：
Nouns Fear, dread, panic, terror, horror, turmoil
Thoughts, instinct
Heart, chest, pulse, blood
Head, brain, temples, forehead
Breath, throat, windpipe, cheeks, tongue, bile
Stomach, gut, cramps
Skin, hair, shivers, tingle, prickle
Adjectives Numb, sick, nervous, uneasy
Dry, tight, thick, heavy
Long, deep, short, shallow
Unsteady, shuddering, rasping
Quick, fast, painful
Cold, tingling
Hot, sweaty
Verbs Felt, thought, urged, warned, paralysed
Rose, grew, swept, surged, seized
Bubbled, gripped, clutched, choked, strangled
Breathed, blew, hissed, sucked, gulped, gasped, tasted
Beat, leapt, raced, banged, throbbed, pounded, hammered, quickened
Crept, crawled, prickled, scuttled
Ran, tore, pumped, drenched
Dropped, fluttered, squeezed, tightened, gripped, stabbed
词块：
* Sick with fear
* Throat was dry and tight
* Tongue felt thick and heavy in his mouth
* Fear was like a bitter bile at the back of his throat
* Cold sweat
* Prickle of fear in the bottom of his spine
* Like an electric shock
* Like a lead ball in his stomach
* Numb and paralysed by fear
* Dread swept through him like a tidal wave
* Fear settled on him like a dark fog
* Struck dead with terror
* Terror surged through her
* Fear seized him in its jaws
* Thought of the consequences urged him on
* Instincts screamed at him to . . .
* Every nerve in his body warned him not to . . .
* Could taste the fear in the back of his throat
* Gulped air
* Let out a gasp
* Blew out her cheeks to stop herself howling
* Took long, shuddering breaths
* Panic rose in his chest
* Panic bubbled in her throat
* Fear choked him with its murderous hands
* Snaked round his windpipe
* Heart pounded
* Pulse raced
* Missed a beat
* Banged against his ribs
* Heart abandoned his chest to pound in his throat
* Squeezed her heart like a vice
* Blood pounded in her temples
* Drenched in sweat
* Cold sweat poured down his forehead
* Skin crawled
* Hairs prickled on the back of his neck
* Shivers tore down her spine and racked her body
* Like a hundred spiders were scuttling down her back
* Stomach dropped
* Like a moth fluttering inside her stomach
* Doubled over with cramps
* Gripped with anxiety
* Like a volcano erupting inside her
佳句：
Every nerve in his body warned him not to go any further.
All his instincts screamed at him to slip away before he was spotted.
He was sick with fear, but the thought of the consequences urged him on.
Her throat was dry, her tongue thick and heavy in her mouth.
Fear choked him with its murderous hands. It gripped at his throat and strangled his breath into short, shallow gasps.
She was struck dead with terror. Her heart was beating painfully fast and banging against her ribs.
Her heart missed a beat, squeezed like a vice by the shock.
As the blood pounded in her temples, her brain quickened and all her senses were alert.
Blowing out her cheeks, she drew a long, shuddering breath and tried to dampen the sense of impending doom.
He felt uneasy. The hairs on the back of his neck prickled with dread and he was drenched in sweat.
Fear settled on her like a dark fog, bringing a chill that crept over her and that no amount of heat could drive away.
The fear was like an electric shock, pumping shivering waves tearing through his body and making his hair stand on end.
He doubled over with cramps. It was as if a lead ball had been dropped in his stomach and was blocking his gut.
Her stomach was gripped with anxiety, like a volcano erupting inside her.
Something was making her feel very uneasy. It was gnawing at her stomach and fluttering as if she had swallowed a butterfly.
六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬
词语：
Nouns Mind, senses, nerves, confusion, embarrassment
Body, heart, breath, throat, tongue, mouth
Hands, palms, stomach
Adjectives Thick, dry, fuzzy
Tense, sharp, alert
Sweaty, breathless
Verbs Shook, trembled
Pounded, fluttered
Gulped, swallowed
Shrunk, shrivelled
词块：
* Tongue was thick and fuzzy
* Throat was dry
* Like a nervous rabbit caught in the headlights
* Blizzard of nerves and confusion
* Heart pounded
* Heart fluttered
* Held their breath
* Watched with bated breath
* Trembled like a nervous rabbit
* Butterflies fluttered in her stomach
* Body was tense and her senses alert
* Felt as if the whole world was watching
* Insides shrivelled with embarrassment
* Mist descended on his mind 佳句：
Her hands were shaking. Butterflies fluttered in her heart and stomach.
A mist descended on her mind. She felt as if she was walking in a blizzard of nerves and confusion.
She felt her body tense and her senses sharpen, as she watched with bated breath.
He tried to speak, but his tongue was thick and fuzzy and pasted to the roof of his mouth.
He felt as if the whole world was watching him, and his insides shrivelled with embarrassment.
七、如何表达悲伤
词语：
Nouns Sadness, misery, grief, despair, loneliness, regret
Heart, throat, lump, sobs
Adjectives Cold, hollow
Painful, horrible
Verbs Filled, welled, choked, broke
词块：
* Silent, shuddering sobs
* Heart was swollen and bruised
* Felt hollow and cold
* Huge lump in the back of his throat
* Horrible sense of loneliness like a dark fog
* Sadness erupted inside him
* Enveloped her like a dark cloud
* Spread through his chest like a dull ache
* Wild grief was building inside her
* Despair washed over him
* Insides curled up and shrivelled
* Hopelessness washed over him
* Coldness settled inside him
* Gripping pain in his heart
* Sob welled up in her throat
* Weight of his grief was crushing his windpipe
* His despair tightened around his chest in a vice-like grip
* All thought and reason had shut down 佳句：
The pain of his loss spread through his chest like a dull ache.
A horrible sense of loneliness bled through her.
The gripping pain in her heart was reflected in her haunted expression.
Sadness filled his chest and erupted in a wail of misery.
He buried his head in his hands and tried to block out the sadness erupting inside him.
She felt a rush of anguish surge into her chest and throat, and flood her eyes with tears.
She felt a wild grief building inside her – taking her over – until she could only break down in an agony of weeping. 八、如何表达疲劳
词语：
Nouns Sleep, tiredness, exhaustion
Legs, head, eyes
Adjectives
Tired, sleepy, weary, exhausted
Heavy, stiff, corpse-like
Dizzy, faint, light-headed
Verbs Sat, lay, dropped, slumped
Dragged, staggered 词块：
* Light-headed with exhaustion
* Legs were heavy like pieces of wood
* Sat corpse-like
* Head was swimming with tiredness
* Dragged down by an irresistible urge to sleep
佳句：
He didn't think he could go any further. His legs felt like pieces of wood – heavy and stiff.
Exhaustion had made him light-headed. He lay on the floor – dragged down by an irresistible urge to sleep.
九、如何表达疼痛
词语：
Nouns Head, breath, throat, chest
Stomach, leg
Grip, grasp, vice
Poison, acid, bile
Adjectives Sick, dizzy, breathless
Claw-like, hammering, overwhelming
Verbs Gripped, grasped, tightened, contracted, throbbed
Churned, gnawed, jerked, writhed
词块：
* Felt dizzy
* Pain was overwhelming
* Like a clenched fist
* Like a vice around his chest
* Like a razor-edged breath
* Like an acid burning his stomach
* As if a poison had taken root in his gut
* Bile at the back of her throat
* Hammering pain in his head
* Took his breath away
* Felt a blaze of pain
* Pain twisted in his stomach
* Tore through his stomach
* Stomach was churning
* Stomach contracted like a clenched fist
* Gnawed in his empty stomach
* Tightened like a vice around his chest
* Pain in his leg jerked with a claw-like grasp
* Every nerve in his body screamed at him as …
佳句：
The gnawing in her empty stomach was making her feel sick and dizzy.
The pain in his leg jerked with a claw-like grip and left him feeling breathless and sick.
It felt like a poison had taken root in his stomach, seeping through his veins and spreading bile to the back of his throat.
Every nerve in his body screamed at him, as the pain gripped his head like a clenched fist.
All thought drained out of him, as the pain tore through his head and left him bent double and writhing in agony.
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