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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an adverisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your adverisement may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a bicycle you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
【解析】： 今年的作文实在是66666，居然是写advertisement（广告）。有史以来，第一次。在考场上，看到题目第一反应是懵掉，但是冷静下来。这篇文章并非难写，而是格式很新才造成的障碍感。 这篇文章的题目要求是：在校园网上写一条广告，卖掉大学时使用的电脑/自行车/教材。广告中需要包含它的品牌（Apple. Lenovo. 都可），性能， 现状（九成新之类），价格和你的联系方式。 广告写作包含要素很多，笔者认为在四级考试中，写出标题和正文即可。 语言方面，广告要求本身就是口语化，简洁！所以，如果文章大家都用的简单句也无妨，只需尽量避免语法错误，做到层次清晰。 现用四级同学完全hold住的句子，提供两篇范文如下： 【范文1】： Advertisement As a student who will graduate, I am about to sell my computer which I have used during my college time. It's an good opportunity for you to buy a well- functioned(an excellent computer) with a reasonable(an inexpensive) price. The brand of my computer is Apple. ( My computer is a Macbook). Its features are as follows. Firstly, it has a 13 inches screen with high definition (it has a big and bright screen )，which is clear enough for you to play on-line games as well as do your homework. Secondly, it has a very fast CPU and its capacity is 256G. I believe this will meet your daily demand. Finally, during my four years campus life, I have been very careful when I use my computer, so it doesn't have any scratches and it just looks like a new one. I would like to sell my computer at the price of 3000 RMB. If you are interested, please contact me. My phone number is 135567788** and My e-mail is 76822**@qq.com. Look forward to your calls. 【范文2】： Nowadays, no one could fail to notice that everyone needs an well-functioned computer in their campus life. Here, it's an good opportunity for you to buy an excellent computer with a reasonable price. I am a student who will graduate, so I would like to sell my Lenovo computer. My computer has many advantages, first and foremost of which is its fast CPU. It is apparent that this is the most important element of a PC. Secondly, my computer has a large screen with high definition. I believe it can meet your daily demand, no matter you use it to play on-line games or do homework. Finally, I have been very careful when I use it, so it has few scratches and almost looks like a new one. To sum up, my computer deserves your attention. I would like to sell it at the price of 2000 RMB. If you are interested , please contact me. My phone number is 135567877**. And my E-mail is 654897**@qq.com. Look forward to your calls. |
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