优秀作文的特征

优秀作文的特征

老师叮咛:李辉老师说，“书面表达套路套话都背过了没？如果你的答案是Yes，那么现在才是你开始做题的时候！”想要提高作文能力,技巧是关键!下面的六个技巧都是值得同学们优先记忆学习的提分技巧!经过了全网首席高考英语名师李辉老师团队高度认真的整理校对,无错、可信!可供全国各省高中生打印、背诵！

高考英语优秀作文的技巧特征：

一、层次不乱 二、句式多变

三、亮点若干 四、巧妙串联

五、蠢错不犯 六、整洁卷面

一．层次不乱

开头：第一个要点

主体：第二个要点

结尾：第三个要点

二．句式多变

1.长短变化  

eg：时间过的真快。

A long time has gone by before I realize it.

It has been a long time since we last met.

How time flies!

Long time no see!

eg：我成功了。

I succeeded in doing...

I am very successful in doing...

I achieved my goal in doing...

I fulfilled my dream.

I did... and I made it.

eg：你很喜欢这里的天气，我也很喜欢这里的天气。

You love the weather here and I love the weather here, too.

You love the weather here and I love it too.

You love the weather here and me too.

2.主、被动变化

eg：我每天都要完成大量的作业，很是疲劳。

I have to do a lot of homework and I'm very tired.  

Mountains of homework every day buries me, making me exhausted.

eg：我每天都坚持锻炼，这样对我的健康有好处。

I take exercise every day, which is good for my health.

Taking exercise is my daily routine, which, I believe, will greatly benefit my physical health.    

3.同功能句型变化

eg：听到这个消息后，我感到很兴奋。

After I heard the news, I was very excited.

On hearing the news, I was very excited.

Having heard the news, I was thrilled.

eg：我没有完成作业，老师很生气。

I failed to finish my assignment, and the teacher was very angry.

I failed to finish my homework, which made the teacher very angry.

The teacher was angry with me because I failed...

eg：如果我想实现梦想，只有努力学习。

If I want to realize my dream, I have to work hard.

Only through hard work can I fulfill my dream.

eg：直到毕业了我才理解了老师所说的话。

I didn't understand my teacher's words until I graduated.

It was not until I graduated that I came to understand what my teacher had told us.

eg：我觉得你应该学习数学。

I think you should major in math.

In my opinion, learning math is not a bad idea for you.

If I were you, I would absolutely take math as my major.

eg：抱歉，我不能参加这次野营了。

I'm sorry that I can't take part in the camping.

I have to apologize to you that I can't make it to the camping this time.

How I wish I could put off the job interview and go camping with you guys.

4.主语变化   

5.同义词变化

6.横向比较变化

三．亮点若干

英语写作中被认为是亮点的东西

1. 一般学生驾驭不了的词汇和句型结构

2. 恰到好处的名言、言语等

3. 一语中的的修辞手法

1.高级句型

例文：

①I’ve been studying American customs according to a task assigned by my teacher recently.②Never in my wildest imagination can I be so crazy about American traditions that I’m desperate for more books to learn about them. ③However, it bothers me that books related to this subject are quite rare and limited, making it a barrier for me to do further exploration. ④To overcome this disadvantage, I’m desperately in need of your help. ⑤Could you please buy some relevant books for me?⑥Any native books concerning American customs are OK. And three or four ones are fine.⑦As for the date, could you please be kind enough to have them delivered before next Monday?⑧ Last but not least, I promise to transfer money to you immediately I receive the parcel.⑨ In sum, you are the very person who is able to provide me with a glimpse into brilliant and colorful American culture.

模板：

很多

a lot of

a good number of

a large amount of

a great deal of

a mountain of homework

a sea of people

abundant / adequate

参加

take part in

join in

participate in

compete in

sign up for…

因此

so/ therefore

as a result

as a consequence

consequently

eg：这个暑假我有许多作业要做。

I have a lot of homework to do in this summer holiday.

学神版：

My short summer holiday will be hopelessly filled up by mountains of homework, making it impossible for me to make any other plans to follow my little interests.

你的文章一定会深受同学们欢迎。

Your article will be welcome to our students.

学神版：

The article written by a native speaker like you will undoubtedly be well received by students in our school, as they are eager to know more about the outside world.  

2.恰到好处的名言、谚语能使文章增色

1.Practice makes perfect.

2.God helps those who help themselves.

3.Where there is a will, there is a way.

4.One false step will make a great difference.

5.A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit.

6.Experience is the mother of wisdom.

7. All work and no play makes jack a dull boy.

8. More haste, less speed.

9. It‘s never too old to learn.

10. All that glitters is not gold.

11. Look before you leap.

12. Rome was not built in a day.

3.大胆使用基本的修辞手法

比喻

eg：所有学生都在忙着准备考试。

All the students are busy preparing for the coming exams.

All the students are as busy as bees preparing for the coming exams.

夸张

eg：我感觉压力很大。

I feel great pressure.

I felt as if I were under a mountain and I can't even breathe.

拟人

eg：我感觉所有同学都在嘲笑我。

I feel all my classmates laughing at me.

I felt as if even the birds on the trees are laughing at me.

四．巧妙串联

起：first of all, to begin with, above all...

承：in addition, besides...

转：however, on the other hand...

合：in my opinion, all in all, in a word...

五．蠢错不犯

赘词现象多发中学生英语写作中常见的13种语言错误：

1.主谓不一致

My father and I likes(like) going fishing by the lake. Large quantities of soil has been washed away.

2.时态、语态混用

Last night, I had(删去)enjoyed a party. The painting on the wall(添加was) damaged seriously.

3.句子成分残缺

I stood up and saw there(添加was) a boy. The young man(添加was) running in the street.  

4.习惯搭配误用

I once heard from(of) the animal like this.We passed away(by) the building.  

5.名词单、复数不分

I made many friend(friends) in the summer camp. We can get some informations(information) from the Internet.

6.动词单、复数不分

Our teacher often say(says) that success lie(lies) in hard work.Mr. Smith, together with some students, are(is) coming to our school.  

7.赘词现象多发

I hope you can return back to(删除) our school soon.

8.基本词汇拼写错误

I flied to New York directly from Beijing.

This will be done immediatly(immediately).

9.前后人称不一致

The boy was born in a poor family but she works(work) hard.

We watched a few movies and we loved it(them).

10.动词原形作主语/宾语

Take(Taking) a walk after dinner is very good for you.

At that moment, I didn't feel like take(taking) a walk.

11. 逻辑主语与主句主语不一致

Preparing dinner, the doorbell rang. 

Walking in the street, a car hit an old man.

13.一个简单句出现两个谓语

There was(being) no work to do, he went back home.

(When)I received you email,(and) I was very excited.

14.中式英语

Next week have a party.

I sorry you I can‘t with you go Beijing.

The family from rich become poor.

六．整洁卷面

英文书写大方、圆润、自然

词与词间距适当

字母大小适当

无大面积涂改