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1. 代词“我”，要大写 The other thing i want to clear up right away is that this was MOM's idea ,not mine. ❌ "i"表示代词“我”的时候，一般情况下要大写。修改为: The other thing I want to clear up right away is that this was MON's idea, not mine. ✅ 2. 英文标点很重要 Today is Children's Day,I have received many best wishes message.one of them made me amazing; ❌ 大家可能一直都没把标点符号当回事，实际上它非常的重要。错误地使用标点符号不仅会可能让读者产生误会，而且显得教育水平低、不专业。上面的文字可以修改为： Today is Children's Day. I have received many best wishes messages. One of them made me amazed. ✅ 在有关英文标点符号的几点注意事项中和大家分享过：英文中没有顿号和书名号，而是用逗号代替顿号、用斜体取代书名号。对标题来说，一般情况下首字母、名词、动词、形容词都要大写，冠词、连词和介词要小写，例如： 《The diary of a wimpy kid》 ❌ Diary of a Wimpy Kid ✅ 还需要注意不要用中文标点代替英文，例如 Today is Children’s Day。❌ Today is Children's Day. ✅ 3. 了解基本的句子结构 It's really a very sad start, which I never expected, I suppose it to be a very light comfortable one, when I first saw the book title. Lydia, is a very isolated child, she has no friends in school.She has few communications with families.It seems, she only has a relativity intimate relationship with the boy called Jame. ❌ 这段话用词表达、标点符号都有很大问题，作者应该是对句子结构没有清楚的概念。我们要明确：一句话主要说一件事。这就意味着无论是多么复杂的句子都有一条主干，其它成分是围绕着这个主干发展的。所以我们写句子的时候要想想：我到底想说什么？如何把我要说的内容连接起来？（善用关联词） |
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