英语短文改错题是集各项语法规则和语言技能于一体的综合性试题。主要考查学生在篇章中综合运用语言知识的能力、理解的准确度及掌握的熟练度。尽管短文本身文字难度不大，却是高考中得分较低的试题之一。近年来，高考书面表达试题的形式和问题更具多样性；试题的内容更关注学生情感培养，注重思想性和教育性；试题涉及的素材和提供的情景更贴近学生生活实际，符合年龄特征；试题有明确的交际对象和写作对象。同时书面表达的控制性逐渐弱化，开放程度有所增加，半开放性书面表达试题已经成为近年来高考书面表达试题中的主流题型。贴近学生生活的半开放性书面表达试题不仅可以让学生充分展示自己的语言运用能力，还可以让他们更为自由地表达自己的思想观点；但同时也对学生的思维能力、思想深度和语言表达能力提出了更高的要求。那么，如何在实际教学中，把短文改错和书面表达结合起来，形成合力，助推学生综合语言运用能力提升是教师需要面对的一个课题。基于此，笔者进行了以下课型的设计，以期可以实现以“改”促“写”、以“写”提“改”，实现短文改错和书面表达双丰收。
In order to release the pressure resulted from our study, I went to Xingxing Farm to pick some oranges together with my classmates last weekend.
Hardly had we arrived at the farm where we saw many oranges hanging from the branch. A farmer told me how to pick oranges. Then each of us carried a basket or a pair of scissors, quickly climb up the ladder and started to pick oranges. Bathing in sunshine, we sang and laughed before picking oranges. After we paid the oranges we picked, we prepared to go back to school.
What a wonderful time we have! Not only did it give us relaxation, but also it got us closer to the nature.
上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，In order to release the pressure resulting from our study, I went to Xingxing Farm to pick some oranges together with my classmates last weekend.
Hardly had we arrived at the farm when we saw many oranges hanging from the branches. A farmer told us how to pick oranges. Then each of us carried a basket and a pair of scissors, quickly climbed up the ladder and started to pick oranges. Bathed in sunshine, we sang and laughed while picking oranges. After we paid for the oranges we picked, we prepared to go back to school.
What a wonderful time we had! Not only did it give us relaxation, but also it got us closer to nature.
【范文2】 Last weekend, I took part in a picking activity in a remarkable modern farm with several classmates, which has impressed and inspired all of us. With green vegetables and fruits, the farm covers an area of 2,000 acres, where advanced technology is used for efficient farming. After the instruction of the staff, we were divided into two groups to do the picking work separately. Not only did we collect vegetables and fruits, but we also ate some fresh fruits there. What this activity has taught me is how hard the farmers work and we should treasure everything we own! Besides, I really appreciate this opportunity to get close to nature. What a meaningful day it is!我的思考：（基于所提供的两篇范文）
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【任务5】 你校英语社团正在组织英语作文比赛,主题为“ Try new things” 。请以“ The last time I tried something new” 为题写一篇短文参赛。（2020年河南省适应性考试） 内容要点: 1. 尝试的时间及内容; 2. 尝试的收获与影响。 我的思考：（基于高考真题与2020河南省适应性考试命题） ————————————————
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