复考以来，写作月计划已经累积出现了八位写作7分+同学了，昨天又有一位同学在11.7日的考试中拿下写作7分，大家真的是厉害！Task 1: Pie charts（3个静态饼图）Task 2: Some people think that all young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?（重复2014.3.8日考题）重难点分析：带有 all（绝对化语气词），我们在写作月计划的第15天会重点学习的题目写法。full-time education 的意思是全日制学习，不是那种在职读书或者兼职读书。这种题目非常不建议写成同意：因为要在250词的文章中去证明一件事的绝对性对逻辑和语言的要求都非常高。因此我们会推荐大家写成不同意。Introduction: I disagree with this claim.Body1: Young adults who receive education would benefit from this experience greatly.1. They have more opportunities to improve their life prospects. If they have one or two more years of studying, they could access sufficient and effective provision and support.2. This may produce positive outcomes on society as a whole. As more young people could access provision and support in terms of education and jobs，the number of youth unemployment may be controlled and reduced.Body2: However, not all youngsters are eligible or willing to attend schools on full-time basis.1. One main issue is the financial burden on families and individuals, since they have to pay more tuition fees. 2. Another issue is that some students may become demotivated. The reason lies in the fact that they may want to pursue their dreams in other domains. In conclusion, requiring all young people to recieve full-time education until they are 18 years old show a goodwill but neglect some realities faced by some youths.
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