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2021年7月17日雅思写作解析 | 好难的并列结构!

 雅思月计划 2022-07-15 发布于四川

今日写作考题

Task 1: Flow chart(流程图:雨水变成饮用水的过程)

Task 2: Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(多次重复的大陆旧题)

题目分析:

1. 这道题目中含有一个并列结构(and),即题目是有两个部分组成,所以中间应该是两个字数平衡的段落,分别回应题目中的这两个部分

2. 题目的意思是广告是否促进消费者买不需要的东西,应该着重写广告通过什么方式诱导消费者购物的,而不要写成广告的利弊。

参 考 范 文

(来源于网络)

As the pace of media technology speeds up, the world has coming in the goods-explosion society and a large number of products use the media to introduce their products. However, those makers are not agree with this point, they believe that the are product sellers good, because of the quality of the goods.

The high sales of goods reflects the media. To begin with, with the society developed, the media play an important role in our daily life, which people have to watch TV or suffering the internet everyday. And then, from the media station lead to that can get more information about some commodities and may be the consumer would like to buy them. What is more, many advertised companies are built on every country, which can help those goods companies broadcast their new products through the vivid, colorful and moving pictures, and we called it advertisement. Most of people can be paid more attention to this. Meanwhile, they will recognize this product and buy it.

However, another disappointing idea cannot be ignored. Their products have a high sales is not just only depend on the advertisement, but also due to the goods have a good quality. Firstly, to be a successful company what one important sector is reputation. So the highly speak come from their clients the more shortages have, the less reputation attain. Another point out that they are use the media just as a tool to induce goods to everyone, furthermore, the productors can choose the commendations what they like, rather than the maker push then to buy.

In conclusion, when confronted with this problem, in my opinion, the quality of the goods is more important than use the media to introduce them.


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