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学生作品 | Posters: Wildlife Protection(2)

 大一一小安安 2022-09-19 发布于福建
可能是第一次做这样的作业,有些小组在第一次上交的时候没有达到要求,返工之后也还不错。不过整体大多数过于注重图片及排版,文字内容部分不如上一个班的好,错误较多。
(备注:文字部分语法错误已适当改动。)




No.1 虎虎生“危”

(王语诺、陈思雨、辛一静、陈琼、何冠霆、黄佳亿)

    Herds of tigers used to live in Southern China. In order to make profits, hundreds of hunters hunt these tigers for their fur illegally. In this way, tigers lost their lives so that they are under threat nowadays. Luckily people were aware of the serious problem and took actions to protect the endangered species. The government also carried out a plan to increase the number of wild tigers. The government called for achieving harmony between humans and animals. We shouldn't buy tiger products such as tiger skin rugs. You know, change always begins with us!

这个小组的同学很用心地给自己团队取了名字,还很好地利用了谐音。图画不错,还融入整体海报的设计中。标题比较普通,没有特别的吸睛之处,但在文字排版上选择了不同颜色来突出重点。这段介绍文字也写得中规中矩,用上了本单元的重点词汇和短语,也是用心了。最后呼吁的这句的确是好用的万能呼吁呀!



No. 2

(张勇、方琳琳、林奕婧、曹雅萌、王清浩、柯贝贝)

    Tibetan antelopes were in danger of extiction before, for they were being hunted illegally for their valuable fur to make profits. The population of the Tibetan antelopes dropped by more than 50 percent during 1980s and 1990s. Thanks to the efforts of the government, the Tibetan antelope was removed from the endangered species list in 2015. However, it does not mean that we can give up protecting them. We still call for humans to protect them before its too late.

没想到以前在网上看到的一个梗,会在学生的海报设计中看到。美中不足的就是这只小羊好像不太能看出特色,如果没有文字说明,都看不出是藏羚羊。文字介绍中最后的呼吁缺了具体的做法,有点不足。



No. 3


(林怡宸、黄紫涵、刘庆琦、陈渝澄、谢怡玲、傅宇佳)

    Every year, tons of litter are being thrown into the rivers. As a result, the countless habitats of dolphins are losing now because of human activities. With human beings becoming more aware of protecting the Yangtze River Dolphin and the environment, reserves are being built for them, and they are being searched for in the wild. 

    Let's take actions to clean up the rivers.

这组同学在海报设计上用上了背景颜色,虽然只有一只简笔画的海豚形象,加上标题的设计,整体还是不错的。一个比较显眼的错误,就是标题 pollute 单词拼写错误了,还是需要细心一些的。另外,这段文字介绍是后来补上的,也有不少错误,语言表达上还是需要继续努力的。



No. 4

(曾飞跃、林圳、张毅、许钧杰、林子扬)

    Polar bears live in the Arctic. It is a kind of bear in Ursidae(熊科动物). It's the largest land carnivore(食肉动物) in the world. The polar bear's big paw enables it to use the front paw as a "paddle" to swim in the water, while the wide back paw is used to walk on the ice and in the snow.

    However, due to the global warming caused by human beings, namely the "greenhouse eddect", the Arctic ice sheet melts. The polar bear is about to lose its home. For the sake of these animals in danger and for the sake of human beings, don't destroy the environment.

海报中心的那只北极熊和一块浮冰的影响画得不错,认真看北极熊还有一滴眼泪。可是左上角那个就有点让人费解了,那黑眼圈和角,是什么生物?反正不太像北极熊。文字部分是后来补上的,可以看出信息搜索能力挺强,就是偷懒没有自己写。




No. 5

(陈锦翔、陈艺铠、陈子龙、黄可菲、黄一瑀、许珞)

    Recently, many wild species are endangered, including the Yanze River Dolphins. Some of them were killed by criminals for profits, while others lost their lives because their homes were polluted. 

     As we all know, wildlife is a part of our planet, and now some of them are in danger. Therefore, wild life protection is inevitable.

简笔画形象可以,就是没有感觉突出什么主题。文字介绍稍弱,呼吁的段落写的比较没有针对性,不够具体化,需要更强有力的语言。标题 Countless "Heroes" 不太好理解要表达的是什么意思。


No. 6 无艳组

(陈星龙、林敏晶、陈艺妍、王涛)

左下角的简笔画让人有点看不懂了,主题既然是保护大熊猫,那完全没必要出现别的动物形象。右边部分原本留白,看着像未完成的作品,返工之后依旧让人迷惑,可以说是浪费了。另外,选择熊猫稍弱了些,毕竟对于国宝的保护,基本是不需要呼吁了。




No. 7

(王思湉)

首先,这位同学独立完成了一份海报,值得表扬。标题很认真地设计了,可惜错了两个单词,让人一时摸不着头脑。文字介绍部分比较平淡,最好能把本单元所学的词汇短语运用起来。

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