【原】学生作品 | Sarek National Park

选择性必修一第三单元的主题是 Fascinating Parks。读思课介绍了萨勒克国家公园，读写课介绍了一系列的主题公园。

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学完之后受燕窝公众号的启发，布置了改写作业。把读思课文本作为依据，改写成读写课文本的写作模式（风格），并配上图片。今天来分享一下同学们的作品。

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❥ 陈蓓凝 ❥

亮点：

1. bring you back to the nature life
2. If you are lucky, you will see a few reindeers feeding on grass close by some visible ancient Sami cottages.
   

3. there are also many natural beauty to greet you

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   ❥ 林婷瑜 ❥

亮点：

1.  comprise of (用过去分词形式作后置定语)
   
2. get a deeper understanding of living in harmony with nature

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   ❥ 黄羽昕 ❥

亮点： 书写及排版

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❥ 林伊涵❥

亮点：

It's of great regret if you reach here without enjoying its scenery.

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❥ 王语诺 ❥

亮点：

1. People come from all over the world to appreciate the land in its natural state.
   
2. If you want to relieve your burden and feel blessed to be alive, come to Sarek national park!

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   ❥ 林彦冰 ❥

亮点：

1.  It will bring you a natural shelter and make you feel belssed to be alive.
   
2. If you want to have a worthy adventure, come to the Sarek National Park.

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   ❥ 郑力豪 ❥

亮点：

1.  Long ago,  there was nothing except vast sheets of ice in Sarek.
2.  Come to this wonderland, wake up to the wind buffeting the cloth of your tent, have a traditional breakfast and enjoy the superb scenery, making you feel blessed to be alive.

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   ❥ 陈心羽 ❥
   

   亮点：

   1.  一系列的祈使句的使用。

   2. If you want to explore nature, come to Sarek National Park.

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   ❥ 黄一瑀 ❥

亮点：

1.  You can follow the Sami... into the valleys of Sarek to track down reindeers...
   
2.  buy some souvenirs such as bone tools, skin clothes and so on

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   ❥ 倪晗 ❥

亮点：

1.  It is protecte by Swiss government by setting laws of banning new developments in 1909.
   
2.  There is neither phone signal nor Internet connection, so you can keep away from the annoying emails or fake social media to have a real rest for your heart and soul.

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   ❥ 郭姿滏 ❥
   

亮点：

1. the sunshine will bring you into a new world

2. Watching the rendeers feeding on grass is a rare experience.

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今天的分享就到这里啦！我们下次再见~