【原】2024年高考英语一轮复习（新人教版） 第3部分 写作速成 第1章 应用文写作　三、建议信

三、建议信

建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。具体写作结构如下：

1．开头表达写信目的常用语

(1)I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.我写信给你一些建议/忠告。

(2)I am writing to express my views concerning...

我写信是要表达我关于……的看法。

(3)You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some useful suggestions here.

关于……你向我征求意见，在此我尽力提出一些有用的建议。

2．主体部分表达建议常用语

(1)I think the most suitable...for you is...

我认为对你来说最适合的……是……

(2)I would like to suggest that...我想建议……

(3)You’d better.../It’s best to...

你最好……/最好是……

(4)As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view，it would be wise to take the following action.

在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。

(5)For one thing...；for another...

一方面……，另一方面……

(6)If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会……

(7)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。

3．结尾表达希望常用语

(1)I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.我希望你会认真考虑我的建议。

(2)I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.

我希望你会发现这些建议实用/有用/有帮助。

(3)I will be more than happy to see your improvements in this regard.

看到你在这一方面取得进步我会非常高兴。

你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.你建议的线路；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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Dear Jim， I’m happy to receive your letter and know you’re coming to China.I am writing to offer you some advice on which route to choose. Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended.Personally，I prefer the one along the Yangtze，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization.You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing，with many well­known sightseeing spots.That’s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice. I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously and will have a good time in China. Yours， Li Hua

1.文章开头扼要地介绍了写信的目的，使用了建议信的套语：I am writing to offer you some advice...。 2.书信的主体部分提出了自己的建议，使用了过渡性词语：Personally，Moreover；高级词汇：highly，recommend，prefer，civilization，amazing，well­known，sightseeing；还使用了复杂结构：why引导的表语从句。 3.信的结尾使用了建议信的套语：I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously and will have a good time in China.表达了希望。

假定你是李华，你的好朋友Jim是一名高三学生。在最近的一次来信中，Jim提到因为书写不够美观、整洁，在多次英语考试中他的作文得分都不理想，这是他目前最大的困扰。请你给Jim回信并针对他的问题提出建议。内容包括：

1．理解和安慰；

2．你的建议。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim，

Yours，

Li Hua

参考范文

Dear Jim，

Hearing your upset about your English handwriting which has posed an influence on your writing scores，I feel deeply concerned.Don’t be too worried，for it is common among your peers.

I have a deep understanding of your trouble.From my point of view，the situation might be caused by inadequate practice and incorrect methods of practice.Here are my suggestions.Initially，it is essential that you practise strokes and letters while watching a demo video or with a copybook.Then，you can arrange a fixed period every day for further practice.Finally，put it into practice in the tests and make adjustments when necessary.

Take action now and I believe I will witness your gradual progress and final success.

Yours，

Li Hua