英语作文：山东省滨州市2013年中考英语书面表达

山东省滨州市2013年中考英语书面表达

请你根据下表中所提供的信息以“Learn to express thanks”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。

背    景	1.认为上中学时吃好穿好是应该的； 2.走向社会后没有感恩意识。
学会感恩	1.感谢社会提供良好的教育机会； 2.感谢父母供养自己上学； 3.感谢老师传授知识； 4.感谢朋友的支持与鼓励。(来源：http://www.)

参考词汇：enter society 进入社会，  sense of thanks 感恩意识，  behavior 行为

要求：1.短文应包括所提供的所有内容，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；

2.演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息；

3.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, boys and girls!

    The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”.___________________________

______________________________________________________________________________

    In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.
    Thank you for your listening!

书面表达参考范文（一）：

Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. When they leave school and enter society, they don’t show any sense of thanks.

I think this behavior is not correct. As students, we should learn to express thanks. The society offers us a chance to receive good education. And our parents also support us to go to school. Our teachers teach us much knowledge, so we should thank them. We should also thank our friends because they give us courage and support.

In the future, we should never forget our society, parents, teachers and so on. At present, we should study harder in order to make our world more beautiful.
    Thank you for your listening!

书面表达参考范文（二）：

Learn to express thanks

Good morning, boys and girls!

The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. We find most Middle School students don’t show any sense of “Thanks”. They think that they are certain of eating well and wearing fashionable clothes.

As Middle School students, we should learn to express thanks. We should thank our parents for supporting us to go to school. And we should express thanks to our hardworking teachers who teach us much knowledge. Besides, our friends always give us encouragement and help.

In a word, we are lucky in everything. But we should learn to express thanks. In the future, I should study harder to repay our parents and teachers. I should go to my friends to share their happiness and sadness.

Thank you for your listening!(来源：http://www.)

 

评分标准建议：

1. 评分原则：

（1）本题总分15分，按5个档次给分。

（2）评分要求：先读文章，再定档次，最后评分。

（3）短文内容：共4个要点，每个要点3分（共12分）；2个打算2分；词数、书写1分。

（4）书写、词数：书写（1分）。如书写较差，影响信息传递，将分数降低一个档次。词数少于80或多于120的，从总分中减去1分。

（5）评分时应注意内容表达、词汇和语法结构的使用是否准确、上下文是否连贯及语言表述是否得体。

 

2. 各档次的给分范围和要求：

   第五档（13～15分）：能写明全部要点，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。

第四档（10～12分）：能写明大部份要点，语言有一些错误（句子结构或动词时态错误1～2处），但行文基本流畅，表达基本清。

第三档（ 7～9分 ）：能写明一些要点，语言错误较多（句子结构或动词时态错误3～4处）但意思基本连贯，表达基本清楚。

第二档（ 4～6分 ）：能写明少数要点，语言错误多，意思不连贯，影响意思表达。

第一档（ 1～3分）：只能写出若干单词，无可读的句子。