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一. 教学内容：
英语写作中句子的表达
高考英语书面表达要求内容充实，句式丰富，用词准确，行文连贯，思路清晰，过渡自然。要想达到这一目的，句子的正确运用和表达是至关重要的。高考书面表达不仅要求学生正确运用语法规则，即结构完整，主谓一致，时态、语态准确，还要有效的使用并列、转折、递进、因果、比较等表达方式，同时“运用较多的语法结构和词汇”进行表达。
［学习过程］
一. 句子的基本结构和表达方式
1. 简单句
Early in the morning, we set out at the school gate.
The Internet is becoming more and more important in our daily
life.
Much of Canada is covered by forests, but in China the area of
forest is much less.
We can send e-mails anywhere at any time and get the latest
information through Internet.
2. 复合句
（1）状语从句
The car hit the man when he was crossing the
street. （时间）
As soon as we got to the campsite, we started to put up the tent
and cook food.
Wherever I am, I will be thinking of
you.
（地点）
She took some books with her so that she would get bored during the
long journey. （目的）
As long as we don’t lose heart, we will find a way to overcome the
difficulty.（条件）
Although it is difficult, we will try our best to finish it on
time. (让步)
（2）定语从句
Yuan Longping, who is a pioneer of agriculture，is called “the
father of rice”.
We chose Beijing World Park as our destination, which lies in
Fengtai in the southwest of Beijing.
（3）名词性从句
Where we are going this weekend hasn’t been
decided.
(主语从句)
My idea is that we should stick to our original
plan. （表语从句）
The fact that the earth is seriously polluted is
well-known.（同位语从句）
I don’t know whether Tom will come to the party
tonight （宾语从句）
（4）非谓语动词
Surrounded by a variety of buildings, we found ourselves deeply
absorbed in the sight.
We left the park feeling joyful.
Having graduated from Southwest Agriculture College in 1953, he
devoted to finding ways to grow more rice.
It is unnecessary to argue with him about it.
The book explains how to solve the problem.
3．固定搭配的结构
It was this park that was full of history and
fun.（强调结构）
As the destination is located in Fengtai in the southwest of
Beijing, we had to spend one hour and a half getting there by bus.
Upon arrival, we visited Lincoln Memorial.
We went to Beijing World Park, which lies in Fengtai in the
southwest of Beijing, in order to see the world-famous
architecture.
Yuan Longping is known as a pioneer of agriculture.
Walking through the park was a feast for the
eyes.
The whole world could benefit from his
work.
His great contribution to agriculture is of great
importance. .
Instead of being satisfied with his work, he was driven by a strong
desire to continue to develop his rice.
For his great achievement, he was honored by Chinese
government.
二. 英文写作中常见错误句型分析
1. 粘连句
Beijing is a beautiful city, I enjoy living here.
2. 句子结构不完整
There are many people agree to keep pets at home.
Although pets may pollute the environment.
3. 不平衡结构
The new
house is large, beautiful and has enough rooms for people to live
in.
There is a
great different between dining out and to have a snack at
home.
4. 悬空修饰
Comparing
with Zhongguancun, Silicon Valley is far more developed.
To finish
the task perfectly, more practice should be done ahead.
5．汉语式英语
Who will
instead of Miss Green?
We all
against all kinds of terrorists activities.
There were
20 people died in the car
accident.
Don’t
worry. Your body will get well soon.
I was very
glad to hear from her letter.
The film had
begun for 5 minutes when I got to the theatre.
The western
part of the city rained heavily yesterday evening.
Our school
have taken place great changes.
Welcome you
to visit Beijing.
三. 写作中常用的句型结构
1. He worked very hard in order to achieve his goal.
2. Having walked the whole day, we were so tired that we could do
nothing but sleep.
3. No matter what problem he faces, he never gives up.
4. It is too long a journey to make in one day by car.
5. You’d better start by introducing yourself.
6. Tom prefers to stay up late to finish the work rather than leave
it done the next day.
7. Forests can not only fresh the air but also reduce noises.
8. You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you
pass the exam.
9. He is such a boring man that he likes neither entertainment nor
learning.
10. Football as well as computer games is popular with young
people.
11. Everyone is busy in the classroom. Some are reading, others are
writing.
12. Beijing has a population of 13 million, making it one of the
largest cities in China.
13. The distance from east to west is over 5,500 kilometers and the
country covers 6 of the world’s 24 time zones.
14. I didn’t know the truth until she told me what had
happened.
15. It is no good talking without thinking carefully.
16. People find it important to have some working experience.
17. It is ten years since I met him last time.
18. It won’t be long before we graduate from this
school.
19. It is convenient for us to be able to get lots of information
through Internet.
20. It took us quite some time to collect so much
information.
21. It’s time for us to leave the park.
22. It is friendship that we value most.
23. It is time that we did something to protect the
environment.
24. They believe it their duty to help those in need.
25. It is said that more chances will be given to the
students.
26. It is known to all that China is a country with a long
history.
27. As is known to all, the 29th Olympic Games will be held in
Beijing in 2008.
28. What excited me most greatly was that my novel had been
published.
29. There is a beautiful girl living in the small village at the
foot of the mountain.
30. The reason why I was late was that I caught in the traffic jam
this morning.
31. There used to be a library, but now it has been torn
down.
32. There is no doubt whether he is fit for the job.
33. To my great surprise, he managed to complete the task only in a
couple of days.
34. I had a roll of film developed last week.
35. Thanks to our efforts, everything is going smoothly.
36. I’m not sure when I saw her last.
37. But for the rain, we should have had a pleasant journey.
38. I was about to go out when the telephone rang.
39. Some people waste food while others don’t have enough.
40. He was so tired that he fell asleep with his shoes on.
41. Once you are here, listen to your teacher’s
instructions.
42. The population in and around San Francisco is now ten times
more than it was in 1906.
43. The more you practice English, the easier it becomes.
44. The Chinese diet is considered to be the healthiest in the
world.
45. Mobile phones play an important role in our daily life.
46. Besides his work in physics, he spent a lot of time working for
human rights and progress.
47. Instead of going to the bank, they will use a computer and a
telephone to change money and to pay their electricity bills and so
on.
48. That is because this professor has disease which prevents him
from speaking.
49. Although many families became separated, people still kept in
touch with each other.
50. China Daily has all usual sections of newspaper, including Home
News, International News, Business News and Sports news.
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