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2013-14高考短文改错 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处 加一个漏字符号({C}{C}{C}{C} {C}{C}{C}{C})，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 2013全国卷I I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 2013全国卷II My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious. 2014 全国卷I Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost! 2014全国卷II My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon .We didn’t need to do so many homework .Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities .For example , we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day . My dream school look like a big garden .There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings .We can lie on the grass for a rest , or sat by the lake listening music .The teachers here are kind and helpfully .They are not only our teachers but also our friends . 2013全国卷I 1.holding改为hold 本题考查固定用法used to do something，表示“过去常常”。 2. passes改为passed 本题考查时态。该句描述的是过去的事实，应用过去时。 3. much 改为well 本题考查副词。very much 很多；一般修饰数量多少；very well 很好；一般 修饰动词。此句是对remember这个动词的修饰，应用very well。 4. shoulder改为复数shoulders本题考查名词单复数。shoulder此处指的是双肩。 5. turned前面加上had[来本题考查时态。该句描述的是过去某段时间内的事实变化，应用过去 完成时。 6. himself改为him 本题考查代词。该句为非限制性定语从句，主语是which，指a deep voice， 谓语动词为set，宾语可直接用名词的宾格，不存在反射或强调关系，因而不需要用反身代词来 himself，应用him。 7.在he was strong and powerful前加and。本题考查并列连词。该句由两个单句构成，前一个单 句中带有非限制性定语从句。两个单句需要用并列连词连接，此处根据句意应用and。 8.去掉in a fact中的a 考查固定用法。in fact 事实上，实际上。 9. during 改成when考查从属连词。when 当……时候；during 在……期间； 10. never改成ever考查副词。never 意为从未有过；ever意为曾经，在任何时候。 2013全国卷II 76.【答案】go改成went 【解析】时态上下文前后不一致，根据文意周日早晨钓鱼是发生过的事情所以应该用一般过去时。 77.【答案】ours改成our 【解析】名词性物主代词和形容词性物主代词的用法。名词性物主代词ours 不能再与名词连用，而后面的fishing poles是名词，修饰名词与名词连用用形容词性物主代词our。 78.【答案】去掉we前面的so 【解析】从属连词。上文有as soon as 引导从句，则后一句话为主句不用引导词。连词多用。 79.【答案】before改成after 【解析】介词before和after错误。根据句意应该是等了大约半小时之后而不是之前。 80.【答案】impatient改成impatiently 【解析】副词与形容词混用。系表结构的表语一般用形容词而不能用副词做表语。get为系动词后面要用形容词impatient做表语。 81.【答案】and改成but 【解析】并列连词的误用。上句话是想放弃与下文的爷爷让我再等等之间是转折关系而不是顺接，所以and改成but。 82.【答案】were改成was 【解析】主谓一致。There be 句型是就近一致原则，离be动词近的是a sudden poll 为单数，所以be动词用was 而不用were。 83.【答案】fish前加a 【解析】冠词。这里的fish是一条鱼是可数名词，可数名词单数前要加冠词a。fish 单复数同形，但是是可数名词需加冠词。下文的“caught a fish”有提示。 84.【答案】minute改成minutes 【解析】名词单复数。根据句意接下来的几分钟，minute是可数名词好几分钟要用复数形式。 85.【答案】felt改成feeling 【解析】非谓语动词。非谓语动词feel的逻辑主语是we(我们)是主动感觉，所以非谓语用现在分词feeling表示主动含义。 2014 全国卷I高考英语微信公众号Englishtec 本文叙述了五年前，在父亲的帮助下，作者和姐姐在后花园里种植了一些圣女果，这些年以来，它的种子我们没有管过，在院子里随处疯长，结果院子里到处都是圣女果，于是我们就把它们分给邻居吃。感觉心里很高兴。 【小题1】before—ago. ago “从现在起的若干时间以前”；时间段+ago与一般过去时连用。before泛指“从过去起的若干时间以前”，意思是“距过去某时……以前”“与其……（毋宁）”，常和完成时连用，这里谓语动词planted用的是过去式，故用ago。 【小题2】在……的帮助下用固定搭配with the help of。所以把by改成of。 【小题3】根据句意和前面的all these 可知，用可数名词year的复数形式years。all these years 的意思是这么多年。 【小题4】根据时间状语Since then可知，本句用现在完成进行时。所以把had 变成have。 【小题5】as a result 是固定搭配。所以在As和result之间加a。 【小题6】因为哪里落了种子就在哪里长，所以这种植物长得到处是。所以把somewhere（某地）改成everywhere（到处）。 【小题7】这种果子个头小，但是汁多、味道好。这里放在are后面，应该用形容词。所以把taste改成tasty。 【小题8】根据后面的them可知，这里用many表示可数名词的许多，而much修饰不可数名词。所以把much 改成many。 【小题9】英语中although是连词，but是并列连词。所以不能同时用。所以把but改成yet或去掉but。 【小题10】tomatoes 是名词，应该用形容词来修饰。副词常常修饰动词。所以把wonderfully改为wonderful。 2014全国卷II高考英语微信公众号Englishtec 第一句：没有错误。My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m.。主语是my dream school,谓语动词由两个，由and并列，左右都是一般现在时第三人称单数。再看时间状语一个a.m.一个p.m.形成鲜明的对比。这句话的结构是：主语+谓语+时间状语+and+谓语+时间状语。 第二句：考查there be的句型。They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.这句话要表达的应该是一个there+be+名词+时间或者地点状语，意思为：某地（某时间）有......。所以They应改为There。注意句子开头的第一个字母必须大写。 第三句：考查时态和不定代词。We didn’t need to do so many homework.纵览全文，时态都是一般现在时，突然出现一个一般过去时，实属不正常。所以应将didn’t改为don’t。 名词homework是不可数名词，不能与表示可数的词如many, few, a number of, a good many等连用。所以应将many改为much。 第四句：考查介词搭配。Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. We have time for sth.意思为：我们有做......的时间。这里介词for可以理解为目的。 第五句：考查名词的复数形式。For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.句子中的one and a half意思是1.5或者一个半,后面的名词必定是复数。所以hour要用复数形式，即：hours。 第六句：考查动词的主谓一致（谓语动词的形式）。My dream school look like a big garden.这句话的主语是my dream school,是第三人称单数，所以它的动词应该是现在第三人称单数形式。即：looks。 第七句：考查冠词。There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.不用冠词的其中一个用法就是：可数名词前通常不用冠词，表示泛指。所以这里flowers和trees均为泛指，不用冠词，去掉the。 第八句：考查动词的时态和动词短语（介词）。We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music.此句话含有一个由连词or连接的并列谓语。前面用的是情态动词+动词原形，而后面的动词则用了一般过去时，这显然不符合连词连接的词性应该一致的习惯。根据全文用的是一般现在时，所有连词or后面的过去式sat应该与前面的谓语动词can lie达成一致，应该改为sit。 listen为不及物动词，不能直接跟宾语，加上一个介词就变成了及物动词，这里与listen搭配的是介词to。 第九句：考查形容词。The teachers here are kind and helpfully.由连词and连接的两个词，其形式应该是一致的。由are kind得知应该是系表结构，所以后面的副词helpfully应该改为形容词helpful。 第十句：They are not only our teachers but also our friends.此句应用了表示递进的并列连词not only..., but also...不仅......而且......后面接的都是名词，完全符合英语表达的习惯。 高考英语微信公众号Englishtec
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