 第1篇（2017四川内江30分） 投稿——帮助他人 某英语报社开辟专栏“Helping others”, 向中学生征稿。假设你叫李华, 请根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇征文，向该报社投稿。
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Helping others
 Helping others My classmate Wei Hua got a high fever last week. He had to be in hospital. Yesterday was Saturday. My classmates and I went to see him together. We met at the school gate at 9 :00 in the morning. Then we went to the hospital by bus. I thought we should get him some flowers, because fresh and beautiful flowers could make him feel good and happy. What’s more, Wei Hua wasworried about his study. So I brought him my notebooks and tried my best to answer his questions. I hope Wei Hua can be better soon. If you light a lamp for somebody, it will also brighten your path. So, take action to help others, because it will not only make you happy but also bring you others’help. 第2篇（2017浙江丽水20分） 为母校做一些有意义的事 假设你是Li Ming, 你的笔友Lisa想了解在毕业之际，你将为母校做些什么有意义的事。从下表所列的五项内容中，至少选择两项，用英语给Lisa写一封电子邮件。 注意： （1）文中必须包括所选内容括号内的提示，并适当发挥； （2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息； （3）词数：80～100； （4）短文开头供选择使用，不计入总词数。 Hello Lisa, How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school. Li Ming Hello Lisa, How is it going? It’s time for me to leave school. You ask me what I can do for my school. Here are my plans that I would like to share with you. First of all, I will volunteer to do some cleaning with my classmates, such as cleaning the windows and sweeping the floors. To keep our school clean, we will ask our schoolmates not to litter at school. Also, I will give away my favorite books to the school library so that our younger schoolmates can read more good books. And I will call on more schoolmates to do so. It’s really hard for me to say goodbye. I wish my school to have a better future. Li Ming 第3篇（2017四川凉山州15分） 【热点解读】《朗读者》是一档由中央电视台推出，董卿担任制作人的大型朗读类真人秀节目。节目以个人成长、情感体验、背景故事与传世佳作相结合的方式，选用精美的文字，用最平实的情感读出文字背后的价值，节目旨在实现文化感染人、鼓舞人、教育人的传导作用，展现有血有肉的真实人物情感。因此同学们在课外学习中应多关注此类节目，把其和学习结合起来。 【写作点拨】本文就“阅读”这一话题展开讨论，根据提示可知，写作内容明确，包括：1. 读书好（阅读的好处）；2. 读好书（读什么样的书）；3. 好读书（怎样读书）。注意：写作时应包括以上所有要点。文章时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。 【高分范文】 第4篇（2017山东德州20分）
 【写作点拨】对于“中国传统文化”的考查倍受中考青睐，考生在平时的学习中应多积累此类素材。本文要求根据提示内容介绍中国的三个传统节日，即考生在构思时每段内容可围绕一个节日展开。元宵节和中秋节已给出详细提示，含节日名称、时间、美食、活动方式及意义，考生直接把内容组织起来即可。在介绍第三个节日时，尽量选择自己熟悉的，且也要能从以上角度发挥。 【高分范文】
第5篇（2017山东滨州25分）
【写作点拨】文章需根据图表提示，介绍几种职业是怎样为社会做贡献的，且要说明学生应该怎么办。图表已给出了各职业名称和对应的关键词，给考生很大的提示作用。考生在构思时，第一段可总说中国人都在努力为建设美丽中国做贡献；第二段分别描述每种职业所做出的具体贡献；第三段阐述作为学生应该怎么做。 【高分范文】
第6篇（2017四川绵阳20分）
【写作点拨】根据题干内容可知，本文是围绕“爱好”展开的，结构简洁明确。首先介绍爱好是什么，然后陈述理由，注意至少为3条。考生只要保证内容连贯，语法正确，且给出的理由充分即可。 【高分范文】
第7篇（2017重庆A卷18分） 照片背后的故事 在过去的日子里，我们曾经欢笑，也曾经哭泣……照片，或将这些精彩定格，或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请。请你按要求用英语写一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事。 要求：
参考要点：
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, 【写作点拨】本文要求围绕“照片”叙述一个与之相关的故事，是一篇记叙文。根据参考要点可知，文章属于经典“三段式”的写作：1. 描述照片拍摄的时间、地点和人物等基本信息；2. 叙述与照片相关的故事，包括起因、经过和结果等；3. 谈论对事情的感受。写作过程中，要注意时态的变化：描述过去发生的事情主要用一般过去时，谈论对事情的感受主要用一般现在时。 【高分范文】 This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily. I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!” Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter! 第8篇（2017重庆B卷18分） 征文——我和朋友之间的故事 在我们成长的道路上，朋友是不可或缺的风景。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆！某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend And Me”为题开展征文活动，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。 要求：
参考要点：
A Story Between My Friend And Me There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. 【写作点拨】本文是一篇命题作文，并给出了参考要点。由题目“A Story Between My Friend and Me”可知写作的重点在于叙述故事，并表达感受。写作时，可选取个人与朋友之间印象深刻，且比较有教育意义的事件。叙述个人故事，要用第一人称，且时态主要为一般过去时，表达感受时，用一般现在时。 【高分范文】 There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me. Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot. In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends. 第9篇（2017浙江舟山20分） 选书的理由 学校将举办“A Summer for Better English”活动，请你从下面的推荐书单中选择两本想阅读的书刊，然后用英语写一篇短文，在学校的English Corner分享。
注意： （1）必须从书单中选择2本书刊，并阐述理由。 （2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。 （3）词数：80～100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 短文首句：To improve our English, the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer. 【写作点拨】本文要求写一篇表达观点的短文。考生在写作时，一定要注意题目中要求选择两本想阅读的书刊，因此在陈述理由的时候，要分别针对选择的两本书刊说明理由。题目中给出的书刊列表“暗藏玄机”。左列书刊提高英语语言能力，右列书刊拓展英语文化。考生可针对两列书刊不同的功能从中选择两本，并简要陈述理由。 【高分范文】 To improve our English,the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer. Of all the suggested books,I have decided to choose Secrets of English Words and Time for Kids. The first one is a book which may help learn English words better. By reading this book, I will surely know more new words. This will make my future study much easier. Time for Kids is a popular magazine specially written for students, in which I will read interesting stories and have a taste of teen life abroad. So it must be great fun reading it. By being part of this activity, I am expecting a big step forward in my English. 第10篇（2017山东泰安20分） 共享单车之我见 如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式—共享单车（bike-sharing）。它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一系列问题。请你根据提示以“Bike-sharing”为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。 要点提示：
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Bike-sharing Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. 高分范文 【热点解读】共享单车是一种自行车共享服务。自2017年，共享单车在各大城市如雨后春笋般茁壮成长，为人们的出行带来了极大的便捷，有效地缓解了交通拥堵，也为低碳环保出了一份力。同时，共享单车也出现了一系列的问题，如乱停乱放，被偷被毁，充值容易退费难等。针对这些问题，各地也推出了一系列的举措来规范共享单车的管理。 共享单车是2017年中考命题人的“宠儿”，以不同的形式频频出现在各地中考试卷中。考生在繁忙的复习备考中，要注重关注社会热点，思考社会问题，尤其是与生活息息相关的热点。 【写作点拨】本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。 【高分范文】 Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It’s known that it has many advantages. So it’s enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it’s very convenient for people to go somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise. In this way, it’s helpful to people’s health. However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them , and some bikes are stolen. In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better, and our environment will be more beautiful. 第11篇（2017达州10分） 如何做一个好学生 某班英语课上，就“争当中华好少年”进行小组交流活动，请你根据活动记录情况，以“How to be a great student?”为题，写一篇英语短文。
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How to be a great student? It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, how to be a good student?In my opinion, 高分范文 【写作点拨】根据给出的题目“How to be a great student?”可以判断题目要求考生写一篇做法建议类的短文。表格中已经给出了具体的做法，考生在写作时需要围绕表格中给出的三个方面写作，并适当发挥。如：注重个人公众场合的行为举止、与同学互帮互助等。做法建议类文章在写作时，主要用一般现在时。 【高分范文】 It’s very important to be a good student. As teenagers, how to be a good student? In my opinion，there are lots of things we should do. Firstly, it’s necessary to develop good habits in life and study. For example, we should eat healthily and do much exercise every day. Besides, we should listen to the teacher carefully and finish homework on time. Secondly, be honest. Don’t tell lies and never cheat in tests. Honesty is the best policy. Thirdly, we are supposed to obey the school rules. Don’t go swimming alone without permission, and don’t take mobile phones to school and so on. Finally, we should get on well with our classmates. When someone is in trouble, we should give them a hand. 第12篇 （2017宜宾15分） 如何提高学习效率 目前很多学生整天都忙于学习，成绩却不理想。请根据表格内容，结合自身实际，写一篇关于“怎样提高学习效率”的短文。 要求：
How to improve our study effectively A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful. 高分范文 【写作点拨】根据题目要求可以看出本文是一篇做法建议类的说明文。考生需要结合表格中给出的中英文提示，围绕“如何提高学习效率”写出具体的做法或建议。写作时，要注意使用连接词将各个要点衔接起来，使文章的表达更流畅自然。除了表格中给出的要点，考生还要适当发挥。 【高分范文】 How to improve our study effectively A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions. You need to find an effective learning method. Take advantage of class time to listen to the teacher. Taking notes will help you remember what the teachers say. After class, you should review your lessons in time. You should also finish your homework carefully. If you have discovered any mistakes, correct them immediately. This will help you form a good learning habit. Besides, you need to do some exercise. It can not only make you relaxed but also build up your body. All in all, you should make good use of time in studying and relaxation. If you have any problems in your study, you can ask your classmates or teachers for help. If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful. 第13篇（2017金华20分） 分享名著——《老人与海》 假如你应邀参加一个国际读书会，并将分享自己读过的一本好书。请根据下列表格中的要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你要分享的书。
注意： （1）可选择使用所给的书名及内容，也可另选书籍； （2）短文内容可适当增加； （3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； （4）词数：80~100； （5）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。 短文首句：The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea. 高分范文 【写作点拨】根据题目要求可知本文是一篇说明文，考生需要用英语介绍《老人与海》这本国外名著。写作要点在表格中已经给出。写作时，首先要介绍这本书的基本信息，如作者的名字和国籍；其次，介绍这本书的大概内容；最后，介绍为什么喜欢这本书。文章的段落依然呈现“三段式”的结构，层次分明。 【高分范文】 The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea,but finds it hard to take it home.On the way back,he has to fight against the fish,and the sea as well. What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting withdifficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book: Man is not made for defeat. This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.(100 words) 第14篇（2017安徽25分） 邀请——参加展演活动 假如你是李华，你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化—戏曲进校园”展演活动，你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
提示词：戏曲opera n. 表演 performance n. 注意：
Dear Mike, I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. Yours, Li Hua 高分范文 【写作点拨】本文要求考生写一封邀请信，邀请美国朋友Mike来参加展演活动。信的开头和结尾已经给出，考生在写作时重点关注如何写好内容。根据给出的要点，短文中要包含活动的时间、地点和活动内容。写作时，考生需要运用适当的连接词将各个要点紧密地连接起来，并根据想象对活动内容做简要的说明和评价。 【高分范文】 Dear Mike, I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. Now, I have a piece of good news to share with you. There is an activity about Chinese traditional operas at 2:00 p.m. on July 1. It will be held on the playground in our school and all the teachers and students will attend. On that day, a culture show and many wonderful opera performance will be put on. It’s a chance for you to learn more about Chinese traditional culture. Come and join us! I think we’ll have a great time. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua
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