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一、如何写建议信 【写作任务】 假定你是李华，你市将修建地铁。请你根据所给提示给负责该项目的英国设计师写一封建议信，请求其考虑残疾人的需求。 1. 专用坡道（ramp）、电梯及座位； 2. 手语（dactylology）和盲文（Braille）指示； 3. 专用服务窗口。 注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir or Madam, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, Li Hua 【写作指导】 一、审题定调 本写作要求给地铁设计师写一封建议信，属于应用文。建议信的目的是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。时态以一般现在时为主，人称多用第二人称。另外，提出的建议要合理、有说服性，语气要礼貌委婉。 二、谋篇布局 因为本写作开头和结尾已给出，所以我们只需要写出正文部分即可。正文部分可分为三部分： 第一部分：引出话题（就地铁的无障碍设施提建议）； 第二部分：提出建议（提供残疾人专用坡道、电梯及座位，增加手语和盲文指示，开设专用服务窗口）； 第三部分：表达心愿（希望对方采纳所提建议）。 三、组织语言 第一部分：引出话题。
第二部分：提出建议。
第三部分：表达心愿。
【范文展示】 ◀ 普通范文 ▶ 1 Dear Sir or Madam, I’ve learned that you will design the subway for our city. I’m writing to remind you to consider the following needs of the disabled. First, you should design special ramps, lifts and seats, which would be convenient for people in wheelchairs to come and go. Second, I’d like to advise you to add instructions in dactylology and Braille for disabled passengers. Third, it would be better if a special service window with computer software for the disabled is designed. I hope you will find my suggestions useful. Yours faithfully, Li Hua ◀ 高级范文 ▶ Dear Sir or Madam, I have heard that you will take charge of designing the subway in our city. Considering the needs of disabled people, I would like to offer several suggestions. First, special ramps, lifts and seats for the disabled should be designed to make it easy for them to come and go. Also, the disabled will appreciate it if instructions in dactylology and Braille are provided for them. In addition, a special service window equipped with computer software should be opened to help the disabled get what they want to know easily. I would highly appreciate your consideration of my proposals. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 2 【实战演练】 假定你是李华，下面的内容节选自你的英国笔友Emma发给你的电子邮件。请你根据此部分内容给她回一封邮件。 ... It was a brilliant holiday, but my health and fitness have suffered. Too many ice creams and not enough exercise! You’re the healthiest person I know — can you give me some advice on how to get fit and healthy again? Thanks, 注意：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。 Hi Emma, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the best, Li Hua 【答案】 Hi Emma, Thanks for your email. It sounds as if you had a good time on your holiday. But you definitely need to change some of those bad habits you picked up. Firstly, you should do some regular physical exercise and go jogging at least three or four times a week. You’ll be surprised how much better you’ll feel as a result. Secondly, you should also change your diet. Try to cut down on fried food, butter, ice creams and fatty meat! Eat more fruits and vegetables. Getting fit and healthy again takes time, so be consistent and don’t give up after just a couple of weeks. I hope this will be useful. 二、如何写想象类作文 【写作任务】 某英语报社向中学生征文，主题为“未来的学校”。请你展开合理想象，用英语写一篇短文向该报社投稿。 注意：词数100左右。 【写作指导】 一、审题定调 本写作要求发挥想象，以“未来的学校”为主题写一篇英语短文，属于说明文。 二、谋篇布局 就本写作而言，我们可以把全文分为三部分： 第一部分：引出话题； 第二部分：详细介绍（从教室、授课及学习方式等方面展开描述）； 第三部分：总结陈述（对未来学校的期望）。 三、组织语言 第一部分：引出话题。
第二部分：详细介绍（从教室、授课及学习方式等方面展开描述）。
第三部分：总结陈述（对未来学校的期望）。
【范文展示】 ◀ 普通范文 ▶ 1 Have you ever thought about what schools might be like in the future? I think they must be different from now. Firstly, there will be no blackboard in classrooms, which will be replaced by a big screen. Secondly, there will be no textbooks, and students will learn from the Internet. At the same time, students will hand in their homework by sending emails to their teachers. Thirdly, robots will do the cleaning instead of students, so that they will have more time for after-class activities. I believe every one of us will hope to study in such a wonderful school, don’t you think so? ◀ 高级范文 ▶ What future schools might be like is difficult to predict. However, it is fascinating to imagine them. First of all, a big screen, which is convenient to use and has a larger capacity, will take the place of the blackboard. Secondly, students will get more knowledge from the Internet rather than from the textbooks. Meanwhile, teachers will examine students’ homework in the form of emails or other applications. Thirdly, robots will do the cleaning, which will set aside more time for students to enjoy their after-class activities. Such schools will come true in the near future. You can’t wait to go to such a wonderful school, can you? 2 【实战演练】 最近某报社正在组织题为“Where will we live in the future?”的英文写作大赛。请你展开想象，用英语写一篇短文参赛。 注意：词数100左右（标题已给出，但不计入总词数）。 Where will we live in the future? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Where will we live in the future? With the population of the earth becoming larger and larger, there won’t be enough space for us to live in. But where will we live in the future? There is a possibility that we will live under the ocean, where there will be beautiful houses of all shapes and sizes. We will rely on a kind of submarine to do our daily tasks, such as going to work, travelling, shopping, etc. Another possibility is that we will live on the moon. Not only will we make the moon a second home but also we will make contact with human beings from other planets and travel there for holidays. I believe the dream will come true someday. 三、如何写投诉信 【写作任务】 假定你是李华，最近你参加了国际旅行社组织的境外游，你对该旅行社提供的服务不满意。下面是该旅行社的广告，请根据箭头所指内容对其不实之处向其总部写一封投诉信。 注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir or Madam, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your consideration. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【写作指导】 一、审题定调 本写作要求就旅行社的广告与实际服务不一致的问题写一封投诉信，属于应用文。 投诉信的语言比较正式且投诉信的目的是解决问题，因此写作时应避免言辞过激。 二、谋篇布局 本篇投诉信的正文部分可分为三部分： 第一部分：表明写信目的（对该旅行社的服务表示不满）； 第二部分：说明投诉原因（指出具体问题）； 第三部分：提出解决方案（希望对方处理此事）。 三、组织语言 第一部分：表明写信目的（对该旅行社的服务表示不满）。
第二部分：说明投诉原因（指出具体问题）。
第三部分：提出解决方案（希望对方处理此事）。
【范文展示】 ◀ 普通范文 ▶ 1 Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing to complain about the service of your company. A few days ago, I joined a seven-day journey to Thailand with your company, but I found a few differences between your ads and what I actually experienced. As the ads said, lunch was served to us, but the food was poor, and some of it even had sand inside. Besides, we didn’t enjoy the shower and could only bathe in cold water, which made me catch a cold. What’s worse, the guide led us to several expensive souvenir shops and wasted much of our time. As a result, we didn’t visit another two scenic spots. I hope you’ll say sorry to us and something will be done to stop such things happening again. Thank you for your consideration. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua ◀ 高级范文 ▶ Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing to make a complaint about the service of your company. A few days ago, I participated in a seven-day tour of Thailand organized by your company. However, my experiences are not consistent with your ads. Firstly, the lunch we were treated to tasted terrible, and some of it even had sand inside. What also annoyed me was that I had to take a cold shower, which finally made me catch a cold. What’s worse, staying in several expensive souvenir shops took up so much of our time that two scenic spots were left unseen. I do hope you’ll apologize to us and some measures will be taken to prevent such things happening again. Thank you for your consideration. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2 【实战演练】 假定你是李华，上个月你在某国外图书网站购买了Far from the Madding Crowd一书，但存在到货延迟、封面破损、书籍缺页、字迹不清等问题。请你给该网站的负责人写一封投诉信。 注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Sir or Madam, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing to complain about the quality of the book, Far from the Madding Crowd, which I bought from your website last month. There are some factors contributing to my dissatisfaction. First, I received the book one week later than originally promised. Besides, no sooner had I unwrapped the package than I noticed the cover was damaged and several pages were missing. What’s worse, most of the book was printed poorly. You can imagine how disappointed I was at that moment. I do hope a replacement will be provided or a refund offered as soon as possible. I believe that you will take my case seriously and I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 四、如何写看图叙事作文 【话题导入】 看图叙事作文要求考生按照所给图画，通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容有条理、有层次地用文字表现出来。写作时可遵循以下步骤： 一、正确理解提示和要求。一般情况下，看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。 二、确定人称。根据提示和要求确定采用第一或第三人称，同时注意勿前后矛盾。 三、确定时态。弄清所要叙述的内容事实是已然、未然还是正在进行，从而确立主体时态。 四、看懂图意，切中题意。正确理解图画的基本事实，并根据每幅画之间的联系，弄清要表达的主题。 五、展开想象。仔细观察细节（图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等），依据图画细节对画面的内容加以扩充或补充。 【写作任务】 假定你是红星中学高一学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中，你们向面人艺术家学习捏面人的过程，并以“A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。 注意：词数120左右（标题已给出，但不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：面人 dough figurine  A Day with a Craftsman ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【写作指导】 一、审题定调 本写作任务要求根据图画内容写一篇稿件，讲述向面人艺术家学习捏面人的活动过程，属于记叙文。 二、谋篇布局 本写作可分为以下三部分： 第一部分：说明故事发生的背景，点明主题； 第二部分：描写故事发生的过程，即四幅图所展示的内容； 第三部分：总结全文，说明该活动对自己的影响。 其中，第二部分是本写作的重点。 仔细观察每幅图，我们可列出每幅图的表达要点： 图一：带着神秘大箱子的面人老艺术家走进教室，受到同学们的热烈欢迎； 图二：同学们围拢在老艺术家身边仔细聆听他的讲授； 图三：同学们三五成群地进行练习，老艺术家给予耐心指导； 图四：同学们将自己的作品进行展示，并兴奋地与老艺术家合影。 三、组织语言 第一部分：说明故事发生的背景，点明主题。
第二部分：描写故事发生的过程。
第三部分：总结全文，说明该活动对自己的影响。
【范文展示】 ◀ 普通范文 ▶ 1 A Day with a Craftsman Last Tuesday our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines. At 8 am, the old craftsman came into the classroom with a large tool box. We gave him a warm welcome. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched carefully. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited. It was a meaningful day! We hope we can have more activities of this kind! ◀ 高级范文 ▶ A Day with a Craftsman Last Tuesday we had a meaningful and rewarding lesson given by an old craftsman. At 8 am, the old craftsman with a large box was invited to our class. We greeted him with thunderous applause. He sat down to show us how to make dough figurines. It was patient of him to explain every step. So attentive were we that we quickly mastered the method and started to make our own “artwork”, while the craftsman walked among us giving us instructions. Soon, we all finished our pieces and took pictures with the old craftsman, and a sense of excitement immediately filled the classroom. What a meaningful day it was! We are dying to participate in more activities like this. 2 五、如何回复电子邮件 【写作任务】 假定你是李华，来自美国的笔友Peter给你发来一封电子邮件，请根据邮件内容给他写一封回信。 Dear Li Hua, How are you doing? I am glad to tell you that I am going to study in China next semester. Because I’m really interested in Chinese culture, especially Tang poetry, I’d like you to offer me some information about Tang poetry. First, please give me an introduction to Tang poetry. Second, how can I learn it well? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Peter 注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【写作指导】 一、审题定调 本写作要求给笔友回一封电子邮件，属于应用文体裁。另外，因该邮件为私人信件，故语言应遵循礼貌原则，但又需避免过于正式。 二、谋篇布局 因本写作开头和结尾已给出，所以我们只需写出正文部分。根据提示，正文部分可分为三部分： 第一部分：引出话题（表达自己收到来信的喜悦以及说明回邮件的目的）； 第二部分：回答对方来信中提到的问题（介绍唐诗的地位和影响及学好唐诗的方法）； 第三部分：期待对方的到来，并表明愿意提供帮助。 三、组织语言 第一部分：引出话题。
第二部分：回答对方来信中提到的问题。
第三部分：期待对方的到来，并表明愿意提供帮助。
【范文展示】 ◀ 普通范文 ▶ 1 Dear Peter, I was very excited when I got your email. Now allow me to tell you something about Tang poetry. Tang poetry is a very important literary form and it enjoys great popularity in China. It is a part of traditional Chinese culture and is becoming popular all over the world. As for methods to learn it, I think you’d better understand the meaning first, and then try to keep the whole poem in your memory. If you choose the right method and work hard, you will make progress quickly. Hope to see you soon. I’d like to offer you help whenever you need it. Yours, Li Hua ◀ 高级范文 ▶ Dear Peter, I was extremely thrilled when I received your email. Please allow me to give you a glimpse of Tang poetry. Tang poetry is a classic traditional Chinese literary form, which enjoys great popularity in China and is becoming popular all over the world. When it comes to how to learn Tang poems well, as far as I’m concerned, the best way is to read the whole poem aloud over and over again until you grasp its meaning. Take proper strategies and put great effort into it, and you will achieve your goal. I am eagerly looking forward to your coming. If you need any help, don’t hesitate to turn to me. Yours, Li Hua 2 【实战演练】 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Penny给你发来电子邮件想了解中国的传统节日——中秋节。请你给他回一封电子邮件介绍该节日。 注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear penny, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Penny, I am glad you are interested in Chinese traditional festivals and I’d like to introduce our Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, which dates back to over 1,000 years. The day usually comes in September or October, on which almost every family member tries to get together and have a nice meal, wherever they are. When it comes to Mid-Autumn Festival, people inevitably think of moon cakes, which are shaped like the full moon and are not only a kind of food, but represent people’s love for their family. I hope my letter will help you appreciate the Mid-Autumn Festival better. Yours, Li Hua
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