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【英语拓展课程示例】浓厚的秋景,雅致的秋语

 凌哥英语 2020-07-30

  妈妈你别说我小,我会画图写文稿!

  桐乡市实小集团春晖小学的301班的孩子可真不得了。这个班级是不是美术特色班啊?凌哥好奇了。

  话不够,图来凑。图画完,说几言。对于低年级的孩子来说,这恰恰是表达思想和运用语言的极佳方式。

  这样的“图文结合”的活动方式,对于正在开展拓展性课程的的学校很有参考价值。

  注:该校学生从一年级开始学习英语,使用沪版牛津英语教材。

【一】

  Autumn is nice. Apples are red. Leaves are yellow. 

  On the river, some leaves look like small boats. They row and row. 

  In the sky, the wild geese look like kites. They fly and fly. 

  I love you, autumn!

(春晖小学301班/朱张笑)

【2】

  The sky is blue. The clouds are white. The grass and the trees are yellow. 

  Some leaves are sleeping on the grass. 

  Grandma is cooking in the house. 

  I love this autumn morning!  

(春晖小学301班/申豫彤)

凌哥点评:第二段,采用了拟人的修辞手法。第三段write what we don't see。第四段突破常规的I love autumn的总结方式,写了更具体的this autumn morning。体现了小作者思维的深刻性。

【3】

  This is a golden season. 

  There are many trees near the river. Some leaves are yellow. Some leaves fall down. They fly like butterflies. Look, There are many fruits on the trees. I like eating fruits. 

  I love autumn.  

(春晖小学301班/吴昱恒)

【4】

  In autumn, apples are red. They are so lovely. I like eating sweet apples. Some trees are yellow.  Some trees are red. Autumn is so nice. I like autumn.

(春晖小学 301班/张宸怡)

【5】

  Autumn is so beautiful. The grass is yellow. The trees are yellow. But the pine trees are green. They are strong. I like the pine trees. I like autumn.

(春晖小学301班/陆飞行)

【6】

  Autumn is beautiful. Look! This is an apple tree. It is green and blue. There are many beautiful flowers in autumn. The weather is cool. I like flying a kite in autumn. 

  I like autumn. What about you?

(春晖小学301班/邱天)

【7】

  I’m Terry. I’m eight years old. I like autumn, because my birthday is in autumn. 

  Autumn is golden . There are so many yellow leaves. 

  Autumn is yummy. I can eat yummy mooncakes and many fruits. 

  Autumn is happy. Teachers and classmates come back to school and study together.

  I like autumn. What about you?

 (春晖小学301班/杨乐璇)

凌哥点评:凌哥超级喜欢这幅画。国画风格的笔触,大胆的用色,简约的风格。啊,吴冠中先生,您有新徒弟啦!第四段,由季节延伸到心情,由风景延伸到校园生活。发散性思维很强。

【8】

  Autumn is cool and windy. Look! The apples are red. The trees are yellow and the grass is yellow too. I like autumn. 

(春晖小学301班/骆沈宽)

【9】

  Autumn is beautiful. Look! This is an apple tree. There are many red apples. I like picking apples in autumn. I like autumn. What about you?

(春晖小学301班/沈鑫彤)

  最后,隆重介绍这些孩子的英语指导教师:对孩子充满爱心、对工作富有激情的彭轶老师。

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