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 雅思月计划 2022-10-26 发布于四川
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Topic: Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people. Why is this? What can be done to encourage local people to visit museums and historical sites?

It is widely acknowledged that historical spots and reputable museums serve as major tourism attractions in cities embedded with abundant cultures. Nevertheless, in recent years, a noteworthy phenomenon existing in the cultural tourism is that these places are frequently visited by incoming tourists rather than local residents. This essay will attempt to look into some possible causes behind such situation and feasible measures to balance the tourist proportions.

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First of all, with better media effects and exposures, many historical attractions and museums have been regarded as internet-famous sites, namely the perfect backgrounds for social media snaps. Naturally, an increasing number of tourists follow the prevalence to visit landmarks merely for photo-shooting purposes. It is common to see them repeatedly posing beside the ancient buildings and exhibits, which may largely affect the touring experiences of locals and arose their reluctance of further visits. When discussing other reasons of the proportion difference, another stark contrast should be considered, which is the familiarity with cultural attractions from the two types of visitors. To illustrate, for the travelers who anticipate to acquire a deeper understanding of the authentic cultures and historical aura, such relics and museums are usually listed among their must-visit destinations, while they may lose the appeal for local citizens who have well explored these places since childhood.

Despite that such differences make it seem incompatible to both maintain the tourist flow and attract local visitors, a variety of strategies can be taken to add to the tourism charm. First and foremost, the perception of museums and historical sites could be changed by holding events at these places. For instance, these historical and cultural spots can hold more themed activities based on public interest, such as history lectures, temple fairs, evening galas and parent-child activities, giving local residents a refreshing feeling and a shift of intrinsic perception. Moreover, a large number of locals might pay more frequent visits to museums if there are special and seasonal promotions, such as a reduced price or free tickets provided in local newspapers and magazines. Related to this, concession cards could also be provided to people living locally so they are encouraged to come more regularly.

To conclude, it is truthful to say that historical interests and museums are priceless gems of our society and worth visiting for all people. However, even being cherished, they are less visited by people residing in the areas due to various reasons. Therefore, it is necessary for these sites to adopt varied workable approaches to fire up local people’s enthusiasm for sightseeing.

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