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我学生写的一段： When humans always use AI to help them solve problems, they also lose the ability to think by themselves since people are not willing to or lazy to consider. This probably threaten our lives as more and more people give up thinking过度推理. For example, students always do their assignment by AI and they will have no job in the future. Therefore,AI is a very dangerous technology. 首先，几个明显的错误： 1 are lazy to consider 要改为 are too lazy to think deeply about the problems 2 threatens 三单 3 assignments 复数（可数名词） 4 内容方面，存在过度推理。 as这个从句，无法支持前面的论点。人们放弃思考，为什么就会威胁到生活？ 再来看今天要讲的“思维”问题，学生写的是： For example, students always do their assignment by AI and they will have no job in the future. 这句话，除了前面提到的过度推理，还存在一个典型的“思维”问题：信息缺少主次！ 从语法角度来看，and 确实很好用，连接2句话，确保没有语法错误，但这是给基础比较差的学生推荐使用的。这位学生语言基础还可以的，要试着再往上走，就是培养“英文思维”。 所谓的英文思维，就是，英文中，信息是分主次的。 学生想举例“学生用AI做作业，将来会没工作”，这是中文。于是，学生就用and自然连接两句话，语法没问题。 但，中文的逻辑是隐形的。 “学生用AI做作业，将来会没工作”这句话，真正的逻辑是“假如学生用AI做作业，他们将来会没工作”。 主句是“他们将来会没工作”，“用AI做作业”是条件。 所以，应该用 If students do their assignments with AI, they will have no job in the future. 或者 Students who do their assignments with AI will become jobless/find it difficult to land a decent job in the future. 用if或who来引导从句，突出主句信息。这样，信息就分主次了！ 这就是所谓的“英文思维”。 |
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